stephymercedes

I really like how short but vivid this poem is. The title, "Vestiges," compliments this quite well too; success and failures, and wondering of those things, brings about traces and ...

Awesome to see something a bit on the lighter side, I like to see randomness at times and this was definitely it! Could totally see this becoming a song sung ...

I absolutely love the first part of this poem, it really sets up the mood and imagery quite nicely. The reader can easily get swept up in many feel-good emotions ...

Dear HBGirl4ever. Starting every line of a poem with a capital letter is for amateurs and hacks. there's something called poetic license, that states any poet may do whatever the ...

Very nice, kept me intrigued until the end. I've love to see more added--maybe finally realizing that dream of going to Europe or hitting a snag along the way? I ...

Huge potential here indeed. Delving in the duality of the reality and mind is limitless and could put to rest any questions readers might have of the narrator and the ...

Very engaging as it continually progressed. The verse about bottling things up inside is well-situated and related to many people and then it continues into many different emotions that people ...

Gorgeous wording! Although, I do agree with this: Hey there! First, this poem was good, in terms of imagery. It forms a vivid picture in the reader's mind. However, the ...