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spottedpebble

...green leaves shake in decaying sunlight, pink peeks over the mountains and everything is changing...

  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Shadows in the Car

    ....

    Oct 19, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: iworry

    Thank you so much! ^v^ Also, I noticed that you tried to include a quote. If you want your quote to look like this insert quote here , put [quote*]insert ...

    Oct 19, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: iworry

    Sorry it took so long for me to reply, but I love your review! Thanks!

    Oct 18, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: iworry

    Thank you!

    Oct 18, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Young Again in Autumn (Best Friend)

    This is a true story. The real thing was on 10/11/23, I published it right after writing it and wrote it right after living it. Fun times after school, fun ...

    Oct 11, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Shadows in the Car

    Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! This poem could be interpreted in many different ways, and like with most of my poems, what it's about is purely ...

    Oct 10, 2023
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, Horror Re: Making Words Rhyme Within A Pattern Is Called A Poem, Even When It's Out Of Context And Has A Ridiculously Long Title

    Wow, this is kinda meta. IN THE BEST WAY POSSIBLE!!! Love this!!!

    Oct 9, 2023
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: they tell me that writing is a form of art founded on rules

    Amazing!!!!!!!!! I can't put enough exclamation points!!!!!!!!!!

    Oct 9, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Theatre, Teen Fiction Re: Thank you, 5 (Chapter One: Moving In Day)

    Yes put out the next chapter! I need to read it!! Also, thanks, if you're anything like your writing, then you're awesome too. ^v^

    Oct 9, 2023
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Lily's Pond

    Thank you! ^v^

    Oct 6, 2023
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Lily's Pond

    Thanks for your review! I like your suggestion to add more dialogue and if I decide to make this part of a longer novella/novel, I will try to do just ...

    Oct 5, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror Re: Warehouse

    It's fine, I could have explained it a bit more. :)

    Oct 5, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror Re: Warehouse

    Hi! Thank you for reviewing my poem and getting it out of the Green Room. I would love to explain the "wispy ghosts of boxes" part. I wrote this for ...

    Oct 5, 2023
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Lily's Pond

    My first non-poem that I have published on YWS.

    Oct 5, 2023
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Biking Past the River, on Hills

    Why, thank you.

    Oct 2, 2023


When people are free to do as they please, they usually imitate each other.
— Eric Hoffer