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Re: Shadows in the Car
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Oct 19, 2023 -
Re: iworry
Thank you so much! ^v^ Also, I noticed that you tried to include a quote. If you want your quote to look like this insert quote here , put [quote*]insert ...
Oct 19, 2023 -
Re: iworry
Sorry it took so long for me to reply, but I love your review! Thanks!
Oct 18, 2023 -
Re: iworry
Thank you!
Oct 18, 2023 -
Re: Young Again in Autumn (Best Friend)
This is a true story. The real thing was on 10/11/23, I published it right after writing it and wrote it right after living it. Fun times after school, fun ...
Oct 11, 2023 -
Re: Shadows in the Car
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! This poem could be interpreted in many different ways, and like with most of my poems, what it's about is purely ...
Oct 10, 2023 -
Re: Making Words Rhyme Within A Pattern Is Called A Poem, Even When It's Out Of Context And Has A Ridiculously Long Title
Wow, this is kinda meta. IN THE BEST WAY POSSIBLE!!! Love this!!!
Oct 9, 2023 -
Re: they tell me that writing is a form of art founded on rules
Amazing!!!!!!!!! I can't put enough exclamation points!!!!!!!!!!
Oct 9, 2023 -
Re: Thank you, 5 (Chapter One: Moving In Day)
Yes put out the next chapter! I need to read it!! Also, thanks, if you're anything like your writing, then you're awesome too. ^v^
Oct 9, 2023 -
Re: Lily's Pond
Thank you! ^v^
Oct 6, 2023 -
Re: Lily's Pond
Thanks for your review! I like your suggestion to add more dialogue and if I decide to make this part of a longer novella/novel, I will try to do just ...
Oct 5, 2023 -
Re: Warehouse
It's fine, I could have explained it a bit more. :)
Oct 5, 2023 -
Re: Warehouse
Hi! Thank you for reviewing my poem and getting it out of the Green Room. I would love to explain the "wispy ghosts of boxes" part. I wrote this for ...
Oct 5, 2023 -
Re: Lily's Pond
My first non-poem that I have published on YWS.
Oct 5, 2023 -
Re: Biking Past the River, on Hills
Why, thank you.
Oct 2, 2023
