spottedpebble

Introspection is a fluid thing like water. Look into your reflection in that water. Watch the ripples break it into pieces. There is so much to know about the things ...

I really like the concept of someone's unwanted and unneeded apologies taking form as a sharpie scrawl on a monument to the person's hapiness :O This is so good.

I, too, crave more

Modern love—not even just romantic love, but platonic and other kinds as well—has felt quite fake to me too lately. It's like you said, everyone fears being seen as too ...

Candy Necklace is a really fun name. Also, I like how you didn't only write his thoughts but showed his uncomfortable feelings by describing him hugging his arms to his ...

What a wonderful piece and wonderful use of imagery (and consonants)! The descriptive imagery in this poem is so lovely.

How ominous... this reminds me of a time two years ago when I was visiting my grandparents. One night we all gathered in a field in the dark trying to ...

These two poems are very different, but at the same time the contrast seems to balance out. One is more negative, thinking about how all things will end someday; while ...

This poem is so calming to me every time I reread it. You added some beautiful imagery associated with the body, even as it is described as having things typically ...

This is so good!

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This story looks super promising and I must follow it now.

This is really, really good. I'm going to have to save this to a Google Doc I fill with links to poems I like.

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This is haunting and amazing and I didn't know you could write like this! I need to review this later