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spottedpebble

...green leaves shake in decaying sunlight, pink peeks over the mountains and everything is changing...

  • Poetry » Narrative, Politics Re: imagine a world, make this world our world

    Okay, first of all let me start off with saying that this poem is incredible and I actually cried the first time I read it because it sounds so much ...

    Jan 3, 2025
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: Circus for One

    I'm not sure how good of a review this will be, (especially since I'm super tired right now,) but I would like to try to answer your questions. I think ...

    Dec 11, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: How To Be A Villain Madame Mouse's Mission Chapter 2

    You have some serious world-building skills! As the story progresses, I'm learning more and more about the setting and the characters. For example, I have discovered from reading volumes 1 ...

    Oct 19, 2023
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Blazing Skies

    Hi, this is spottedpebble with a short review of your short story. This is a fun fantasy, and I loved the element of romance in it. I like how Queen ...

    Oct 19, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: How To Be A Villain Madame Mouse's Mission Chapter 1

    [center]Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! This is spottedpebble. (But you probably already know that from reading my username up there. double-angle-up Top Graham Cracker - ...

    Oct 19, 2023
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: Listen or turn away..

    This is a story about a girl who feels alone and like no one loves her. She is not able to speak and for that, other people feel sorry for ...

    Oct 18, 2023
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Villainess

    This is a short story about someone walking through the city she has just destroyed. This is a bit of a backstory because it says I couldn't be who they ...

    Oct 17, 2023
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Humor Re: A Letter to Satan

    Here's a short review: This really shows you the dangers of misspelling. It's such an original idea and it made me laugh so hard, even when I was just reading ...

    Oct 17, 2023
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Snooze Button

    Sorry, this is an awfully short review. This was an interesting story about a man who arrives at the hall where a machine he had built is going to take ...

    Oct 16, 2023
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Unpredictable Emotions.

    I've never reviewed anything like this before, but this really spoke to me so here goes... I applaud you in having the courage to put this out for others to ...

    Oct 13, 2023
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: collection two

    Sorry, this is a really short review. I look at the Green Room every day to see if there's something new I would like to read, and yet somehow I ...

    Oct 12, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Theatre, Teen Fiction Re: Thank you, 5 (Chapter One: Moving In Day)

    [center]Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! This is spottedpebble with a review! I love the name and am excited to read more to see where it ...

    Oct 9, 2023
  • Short Story » Theatre, General Re: Last Dance

    I must ask, how did you come up with a brilliant idea like this? What was your inspiration? A dying ballerina takes the stage for one last performance. Wow. What ...

    Oct 7, 2023
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Scatterbrained

    I like all of this poem, but I really like the lines Cracked acorn shells under white sneaker soles Dead cicadas on a pavement screaming no more because they give ...

    Oct 7, 2023
  • Poetry » Other, Lyrical Re: summer whisperings and autumn wisdom

    Okay, first of all, I love your writing style. You have placed your pauses in just the right spots and cut off lines in all the right places to put ...

    Oct 2, 2023


Here's to the crazy ones. The misfits. The rebels. The troublemakers. The round pegs in the square holes. The ones who see things differently. They're not fond of rules. And they have no respect for the status quo. You can quote them, disagree with them, glorify or vilify them. About the only thing you can't do is ignore them. Because they change things. They push the human race forward. And while some may see them as the crazy ones, we see genius. Because the people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world, are the ones who do.
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