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spottedpebble

...green leaves shake in decaying sunlight, pink peeks over the mountains and everything is changing...

  • Poetry » General, General Re: What would I be without my flaws?

    Hi Danitheella! spottedpebble here with a review :D I really enjoyed reading this poem. You have a lovely poetic voice. Each line sounds smooth and almost fluttery when read aloud. ...

    Aug 9
  • Poetry » Culture, General Re: Girls

    Hi NotReallyHuman! spottedpebble here with a review :D First of all, I like the conversational tone this poem takes, like it's inviting the readers to listen to you speak out ...

    Jul 13
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: secondhand smoke

    Hello, pebble here with a review! What grabs my attention the most about this poem is the way you used smoking as a metaphor for an unhealthy relationship. Just like ...

    Jun 10
  • Poetry » General, General Re: 03.13.26 - saturate

    Hi! spottedpebble here using the Lucky Review Template; let's get into it! ☘ 1st Leaf: First Impressions & Initial Thoughts The first thing I notice when reading this poem is ...

    Mar 18
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: today i will write something

    Okay, wow, I love this work so much. The first time I read through it, I had to sit back for a few minutes to let everything sink in. This ...

    Feb 14
  • Poetry » General, General Re: but what if my soul is good?

    I’ve been meaning to review this one for a really long time, and now I’m finally doing it! Yay! initial thoughts and noticings I’ve told you before but I LOVE ...

    Jan 26
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: A love that slipped

    Hello Alex, Pebble here with a review! Before I start, let me say that the first lines of this poem felt like they were calling to me. They really drew ...

    Oct 25, 2025
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: The Life I Deserve Doesn't Exist

    Hi! This is Pebble with an autumn -themed review for spooky season! (Based on the incredible YWS S'more Method , of course) Crisp Air — initial thoughts and noticings This ...

    Oct 25, 2025
  • Short Story » Literature, Narrative Re: The Loneliness of Pride

    Hi! This is Pebble with a review! There’s a lot to unpack here, as this story is full of long, detailed paragraphs listing the character’s thought process when visiting his ...

    Oct 25, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: Just for the Summer Chapter 5

    Pebble here with another review! I just read all the other chapters of this story and I'm loving the way you write these characters! They feel like real people, with ...

    Oct 25, 2025
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: I exist

    Hi, Pebble here with a review of your poem! The brain tells you, you are not real, you feel as though you are not. I appreciate that you published such ...

    Oct 25, 2025
  • Poetry » General, General Re: hazel eyes

    It’s October again and I have hazel eyes, so I felt it was time for me to review this poem. It’s very rare that I see anything mentioning hazel eyes, ...

    Oct 25, 2025
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: origami butterflies

    Hi chem! This is pebble with an autumn -themed review for spooky season! (Based on the incredible YWS S'more Method , of course) Crisp Air — initial thoughts and noticings ...

    Oct 21, 2025
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dreaming in colour

    Hi! This is Pebble with an autumn -themed review for spooky season! (Based on the incredible YWS S'more Method , of course) Crisp Air — initial thoughts and noticings Okay, ...

    Oct 20, 2025
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: crocheting what we could be

    Hi! Pebble here with a review! Initial Thoughts Your first line is gorgeous and really got me hooked. I love the way you describe everything, it's so soft and delightful. ...

    Jan 3, 2025


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