spottedpebble

And you recently said you were done with writing! This is genuinely really good and I'm not just saying that because you're my friend. The style, the wording, the pacing... ...

Hi Danitheella! spottedpebble here with a review :D I really enjoyed reading this poem. You have a lovely poetic voice. Each line sounds smooth and almost fluttery when read aloud. ...

Hi NotReallyHuman! spottedpebble here with a review :D First of all, I like the conversational tone this poem takes, like it's inviting the readers to listen to you speak out ...

Hello, pebble here with a review! What grabs my attention the most about this poem is the way you used smoking as a metaphor for an unhealthy relationship. Just like ...

Hi! spottedpebble here using the Lucky Review Template; let's get into it! ☘ 1st Leaf: First Impressions & Initial Thoughts The first thing I notice when reading this poem is ...

Okay, wow, I love this work so much. The first time I read through it, I had to sit back for a few minutes to let everything sink in. This ...

I’ve been meaning to review this one for a really long time, and now I’m finally doing it! Yay! initial thoughts and noticings I’ve told you before but I LOVE ...

Hello Alex, Pebble here with a review! Before I start, let me say that the first lines of this poem felt like they were calling to me. They really drew ...

Hi! This is Pebble with an autumn -themed review for spooky season! (Based on the incredible YWS S'more Method , of course) Crisp Air — initial thoughts and noticings This ...

Hi! This is Pebble with a review! There’s a lot to unpack here, as this story is full of long, detailed paragraphs listing the character’s thought process when visiting his ...

Pebble here with another review! I just read all the other chapters of this story and I'm loving the way you write these characters! They feel like real people, with ...

Hi, Pebble here with a review of your poem! The brain tells you, you are not real, you feel as though you are not. I appreciate that you published such ...

It’s October again and I have hazel eyes, so I felt it was time for me to review this poem. It’s very rare that I see anything mentioning hazel eyes, ...

Hi chem! This is pebble with an autumn -themed review for spooky season! (Based on the incredible YWS S'more Method , of course) Crisp Air — initial thoughts and noticings ...

Hi! Pebble here with a review! Initial Thoughts Your first line is gorgeous and really got me hooked. I love the way you describe everything, it's so soft and delightful. ...