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I'm not sure how good of a review this will be, (especially since I'm super tired right now,) but I would like to try to answer your questions. I think ...

You have some serious world-building skills! As the story progresses, I'm learning more and more about the setting and the characters. For example, I have discovered from reading volumes 1 ...

Hi, this is spottedpebble with a short review of your short story. This is a fun fantasy, and I loved the element of romance in it. I like how Queen ...

[center]Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! This is spottedpebble. (But you probably already know that from reading my username up there. double-angle-up Top Graham Cracker - ...

This is a story about a girl who feels alone and like no one loves her. She is not able to speak and for that, other people feel sorry for ...

This is a short story about someone walking through the city she has just destroyed. This is a bit of a backstory because it says I couldn't be who they ...

Here's a short review: This really shows you the dangers of misspelling. It's such an original idea and it made me laugh so hard, even when I was just reading ...

Sorry, this is an awfully short review. This was an interesting story about a man who arrives at the hall where a machine he had built is going to take ...

I've never reviewed anything like this before, but this really spoke to me so here goes... I applaud you in having the courage to put this out for others to ...

Sorry, this is a really short review. I look at the Green Room every day to see if there's something new I would like to read, and yet somehow I ...

[center]Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! This is spottedpebble with a review! I love the name and am excited to read more to see where it ...

I must ask, how did you come up with a brilliant idea like this? What was your inspiration? A dying ballerina takes the stage for one last performance. Wow. What ...

I like all of this poem, but I really like the lines Cracked acorn shells under white sneaker soles Dead cicadas on a pavement screaming no more because they give ...

Okay, first of all, I love your writing style. You have placed your pauses in just the right spots and cut off lines in all the right places to put ...

I'll say it first thing: this poem makes me feel guilty about all my notebooks sitting in drawers right now. How I have interpreted this poem: Someone got a new ...