spokenfor09

I thought that this was a really cool stroy. I liked how you dident make it all pro writting stuff. Like you had bad grammer on purpose to make the ...

I'm honestly not a critier person. But all the same I read this and thought it was really cool. I liked your take on the civel war by a crutch ...

Honestly I was a little creeped out by Billy. Mostly thats my guy avierion to mascara. Other then that I thought that it was a good story and that it ...

Well lets see you have no idea who I am but I'm gonna put this out there anyway. I can almost relate to you about what happend in your life ...

ya see i agree with ( ooo forget their name) whoever it was that said that it wasent snapish. pesonetly i think snape would have tried using a potion or ...

i dont claim to know alot about the tecnicle side of poety. but i think it makes us think about ourselfs. it askes the qustion where am i personly. thats ...

its really good stuff. i like the description of the charicters. i felt a little lost cuse i was thrown into the middle of a sence. like there was no ...

im still likein it! a little misdiscription here or ther. like your level of detail when you describe sence or people drops off once or twice and you sound like ...

well for me as a guy i dident like the 2nd person "view" very much cuse i have a hard time imagining my self as a girl. but thats just ...

i can serusly see the begining to a really sweet story! the vampire thing was/is tight. anyway the transiion from the into to her getting to the forrest was abrupt ...

well i again am not a very good writer. my first thought is that yo u just recently had a very ugly break up. but whut do i know. thought ...

i myself have spent many a night deep in thought and sorow over whut u wrote. im also happy for u that now everything works out. and if u feel ...