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Haha thanks. But regarding "albeit," isn't it still correct if I were to invert the sentence? Like: "I maintain a most suspicious desire for them, albeit I know not what ...

Yes, please format, thank you, yes. OK.

bootiful. luv it. Probably the best piece I've read on here.

I feel like Gertrude Stein might like this, but I also feel like Horse_ebooks from Twitter would like it too.

Cute.

Well, Threnody, I would foremost like to say thank you for your time and thoughts for this review. I respect and appreciate your opinion. I would then like to say ...

I'm not sure if I understand exactly. You suggest I exchange the beginning about the clouds being what they are, at least in the manner I've done it, and begin ...

You're absolutely right. I'll admit I didn't give this piece much time on editing, and there are definitely a few jumbled places. Often times I do, however, give deliberate length ...

Thank you so much for the time and the review! :D

I'm real picky on poetry. I don't know what my deal is. And with this poem, with its neutral diction, simple meaning, free verse, I find myself really, really liking ...

Um, I approve. :D

Hello there! :D Thank you for the kind words, but just to clarify, I know exactly what you mean xD This was something of a stream of consciousness poem in ...

This reminds me a lot of this poem I read called I Won't Promise You Forever, or something like that. However, I thought that one was really dumb, and I ...

I have nothing bad to say.

Thank you all! Baconator was right on a lot of points, which is pretty commendable considered my piece was such a short length. n_n And for the most part, I'm ...