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I wanna know is the ending understandable? Does the reader come to know that it was the ghost of her that came to say the last goodbye and I am ...

Hey people I need to improve the ending. Please help me!

plz post reviews!!!plz plz do.

ok thanks for all your reviews I was waiting for them all day long. and yes aghast was indeed used incorrectly. so I edited it. Thnx watervyper. And about the ...

Ok normally I dont write these type of things but One of my friends challenged me that I cant write these type of things. So I proved it she was ...

y isnt anybody writing any comment is it so bad??I dont think so. maybe u all are it so?? Then please dont be I need to know how my poem ...

i wrote it for my best frnd who was like my sister she is now in canada n am in india

hi guys never had so many replies for a poem. thnx guys and i cant decide if u all like it or not cause some of them say my poems ...

well it was good and needs no editing gud job and u chose a great topic to write abt too.

wow that was cool very interesting like a professional peice but am not sure its science fiction more like fantasy but damn cool cant wait to read the other stories.

well sorry abt this line And proposed you in written it shouldve been 'proposed to you in written'

Well it was good. but- Resonating from within the four walls, as they became her tomb. i think you suld write these lines separately. otherwise it was great.

It was a nice poem. And it was quite wonderful that with such a gruel barbaric,evil,sickening etc. a poem can look so beautiful. keep it up.

well It had a lot of wit and watever it was great though there was no sense of this play it was good for timepass.

"A fool they said. A fool they meant." well to be honest I made this line to build a flow, a rythm in the poem. I also dont know if ...