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Re: I write because...
Sphealwithit here... This equals so true :) It was heartfelt and pretty emotional. I know the feeling of not wanting to write because you're not feeling it. Every time I ...
Nov 29, 2013 -
Re: The Unnamed one.
Hi Sphealwithit here... Happy reviewing days to you I liked this story, it's pretty well written. However you need to watch your POV. It goes from "I" to "He" randomly. ...
Nov 15, 2013 -
Re: To My Sin
Hi, sphealwithit here, I'm not really into religion although I am a christian. Anyway, in general terms the poem is good the stanzas are all really well laid out and ...
Nov 12, 2013 -
Re: Stand up!
Hi sphealwithit here, good marrow This is really good. Definitly something I dont see everyday. To me it seems like this girl is just trying to make it through life ...
Nov 12, 2013 -
Re: The New Hunger
sphealwithit here, I dont normally read vampire stories but this was generally good. I wish i was aloud to write things like this for my english mine have to be ...
Nov 11, 2013 -
Re: I Still Miss You
Sphealwithit here, happy friday I really like this. It's so cute and sad romantic basically really good. I like the awkwardness in which they meet and I kinda really wanna ...
Oct 18, 2013 -
Re: “TECHNOLOGY – A ‘PRO’ at the Society”
Sphealwithit here, good marrow Good essay you got here. I don't usually review things like this so my opinion may not be valuable. I see a few mistakes however, you ...
Oct 3, 2013 -
Re: I Don't Understand Hate
Sphealwithit here, happy reviews for people. Woah this poem is good. It adresses some serious issues and I enjoyed reading it. I take it the third stanza is about bullying. ...
Oct 2, 2013 -
Re: Not Enough
Sphealwithit here, happy days filled with reviews. I really like this poem, the main reason being that I know that feel bro. Anyway.... I like the rhyme scheme it's really ...
Oct 2, 2013 -
Re: Dream Guardian
Sphealwithit here, Good marrow I love this poem. Makes me wonder as to why I have so many nightmares though. Anyway the language and pace are basically perfect. The use ...
Oct 1, 2013 -
Re: Inhuman
Sphealwithit here, good marrow I really like this poem. The language used is simple but effective. The poem has a real sense of wanting to belong in it. You've conveyed ...
Oct 1, 2013 -
Re: Welcome To Hell
Sphealwitit here, good morning. The poem itself has an awesome idea behind it. I think that you've got a very vivd picture of hell here. Some may not agree but ...
Oct 1, 2013 -
Re: The Dawn of Winter
Sphealwithit here, just about good morning This story is so good. I love the plot. It seems abit rushed though, like one event happens too quickly after another. The descriptions ...
Sep 30, 2013 -
Re: Tricks
Sphealwithit here, good morning This is a good poem. A few grammatical errors here and there, that a simple re-read could fix. The use of 'I' gives the poem an ...
Sep 30, 2013 -
Re: Leprosy
Sphealwithit here, happy review day. Firstly I'm just saying this from a scientific point of view I don't think mice give people leprosy. I do like the poem. It's just ...
Sep 29, 2013
