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  • Poetry » Lyrical, Horror Re: There’s a canker in my brain

    Hey, it's Summer here to review your poem. I enjoyed reading your work - I appreciated that it was humorous, but truthful at the same time. I also really enjoyed ...

    May 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Library.

    Hello! I really enjoyed reading your poem. I too love libraries!! Now onto reviewing... I'm going to disagree with the first reviewer on the bullet points - I really liked ...

    May 10, 2016
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: A journey that none can miss

    Hey, Awesome poem - the style with which you wrote is very different from how I usually write, but I enjoyed it nonetheless. Now, onto the review... Spelling/Grammar: 1) Whenever ...

    Apr 18, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: To Be a Violist

    Hello there, I’m just dropping by for a review. So, first off this is an amazing poem. I loved it! Lately, I’ve been at a lack of good poems to ...

    Apr 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Perhaps

    Hey, Just dropping by for a quick review. Your poem was quite good. It evoked a lot of emotion, and for the most part it flowed nicely. It was a ...

    Mar 29, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: your feet are steady on the ground

    Hey! This will probably end up being a quick review, because I really don't have any criticisms for you. I guess I'll just tell you what I like about your ...

    Mar 21, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: All That We Are: Chapter 3

    Hey, this was really cool! I enjoyed reading it, and I have just a few critiques. Feel free to do what you please with my feedback, but keep in mind ...

    Feb 28, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: Tick, Tick, Tick.

    I would like to begin by saying that this poem was quite interesting. I appreciated the unusuality of it, and the creativity with which you write. To be complete honest ...

    Feb 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Lonely Road

    Hey, Overall your poem was pretty good. Your rhymes scheme usually flowed well, but there are a few lines I would take a look at. The lines "But no matter ...

    Feb 24, 2016
  • Other » General, General Re: "What time is it?" (a train-of-thought existential crisis)

    I'd like to start by saying I really liked reading this. For me, being a person who loves forgetting what day it is, this was a super enjoyable read. Your ...

    Feb 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Lyrical Re: Spring

    This poem is oh so cute! I love the short stanzas and short lines, they make your poem super sweet. I especially love that your poem is free verse and ...

    Feb 19, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: In Time

    Hey-oh, it's summerinthecity Just so you're aware, your poem is the first thing I'm reviewing and I have absolutely no idea how this website works. I liked the concept of ...

    Feb 18, 2016


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— Liminality