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he was indeed death...and it was only polite for her the invite him inside...I'm sorry that it has no punctuation or periods I'm not good at correcting myself but I ...

thank you for taking time out of your day to write this review and thank you for your idea I'm going to try it and again thank you for writing ...

the person in the story is me and yes I accidently put it under poetry...its not finished yet but my sister was bothering me to wrap it up so...anyways I ...

I appreciate all your feed back thank you and yes I noticed I have a problem with not capitalizing words sorry about that I'm going to try and do something ...

yeah I know I'm really bad when it comes to putting ands oh and adding punctuation sorry and I know its a bit confusing but its because its only polite ...

thnx I appreciate the feed back and I've decided to try flamgo's advice as soon as I figure out where to start on the punctuation

yh I know but I just wrote it so I didn't have much time i'm still working on it in some ways

thnx I appreciate the feed back and the advice I'll try and do something with it

thank you and I'll try to fix it up so it will come across better

this is incredible I love it I don't think I've ever read something as intriguing as this it made me think about what you mean a lot and it was ...

I loved reading this it's wonderful and it represents so many things and it surfaces so many feelings it's a great poem and I'm glad I had the pleasure of ...

this is really interesting I enjoyed reading this seemingly sci fy story it's wild and extraordinary to say it was good would be a lie because I thought it was ...

this is really sad but you can really understand what the writer is trying to tell you and the way the writer describes in detail what happens that morning it's ...

thank you for sharing your review with me I really love getting feed back and I greatly appreciate your opinion

thank you for your opinion I appreciate it alot and I know the ocean thing was repeated a lot I kind of ran out of ideas at first and I ...