soccerstar17

I like this! It is so sweet and touching and it makes me smile. It is good to have someone in your life who can make you feel that way ...

hey I really like your poem. I like how your entire poem is basically a metaphor- life like a dying flame. I feel the charachters pain-in love but being bullyed ...

Wow!! I LOVE IT!! its so chilling and creepy. I like how you became Death, with a capital D. You made it become alive! You also rhymed it, which always ...

I really liked this its very sad though. I mean when is poetry ever happy? I liked the middle part- why the tears fall from my face as i lay ...

Grrrrreat poem! I really liked it and definitly relate to it! That's how I always feel. I liked the unique on going flow because thats how ideas tend to work. ...

Heyy! I really liked your poem. i loved that you made them rhymh, it gives it a nce soft flow. it shows what love means to you and i adore ...

I really liked your poem. I can relate to this; I hate going up to someone and your all excited and then you realize it is not them. It's really ...

I loved this poem. I know poems don't have to rhyme but it is my favorite to read the ones that do. I just think it makes it more flowy ...

I really loved this poem!! And it is true in most ways. I thought that it was really neat how everything fell together and the slow, beating rythym it had!! ...

WOW!!!! This was so emotional, and the last three lines just ripped my heart to pieces! I loved it so much, but it was sad. I hope you keep writing ...

This is really great and it reminded me a lot of beastly, where the girl loves the guy no matter what other people think. I thought it was bueatiful and ...