snowberry23

Well, the first thing that popped into my mind was, “I really like the unique names.” I know its set in the past in India but still; I love when ...

Hey! I promise I am going to read all three parts of your story I just didn’t want to leave you feeling as if I was taking for ever with ...

Hey, SnowBerry here, thanks again for participating in my contest and I’m sorry it’s taken me so long to review this piece of work, but better late than never. First ...

Well, I certainly liked this piece; the thing about your writing is that it reminds me a lot of my writing, well, the pieces I would never dare show anyone. ...

Okay, wow, just wow. I typically read through peoples works, mostly poems and such, and think of a powerful word to describe their piece. This poem particularly backed my mind ...

Well, the first word that comes to mind is brilliant, misunderstood, wonderfully executed, brilliance. I am personally a huge fan of the idea of time, and thats just what it ...

Here I go I fell in love with this work of art after the second stanza You truly painted a picture with your words and I am... I cant even ...

Wow! Amazing job, I was fixated on every word!! Here are the thoughts that ran through my head as I read every talent dripping line %uF04A Past the point of ...

Well to start, let me just say I am a huge fan of the ~ (I actually don’t know the name for this symbol) Wow- I couldn’t find it on ...

Well, wow. This is one of the few poems I have read that has just gotten better and better as I continued reading. Now let me just state a few ...

Well, first of all, let me start off by saying welcome to the YWS  Now, down to business— I am not one to go against writing in a different ...

Well—I have a lot of thoughts so here we go! First: I can relate—just a bit of history to prove it ~ I have secretly been in love with my ...

Unbelievably breathe taking. This needs to be seen by more than just the YWS fabulous eyes (in my opinion!) I have never cared for the 4th of July myself, but ...

I agree with the first comment made, “Strong Stuff!” First off, let me say this, the title attracted my attention because I was born in Georgia and I love hearing ...

Okay, well I really like the idea and all of the metaphors you used but a lot of your ideas were unclear or out of place. For example, he committed ...