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Re: Dreams Tell Lies - Chapter Ten
Hey I absolutely love this story! It is very interesting and engaging, the creative outline and plot is great and there are even twists and turns that suprised me! There ...
Jun 7, 2011 -
Re: Dreams Tell Lies - Chapter Nine
Hey I haven't read the other chapter but this was really good, it had great grammer and the way you wrote the story flowed very well. I also love the ...
Jun 6, 2011 -
Re: Eclipses
I really liked this it was really beautifully written, the only thing you need to work on or at least something I had a hard time with was what exactly ...
May 20, 2011 -
Re: Run, Fat Boy, Run! Part 2
I would also like for you to PM me! Thanks! I love these journals or whatever they are, it almost makes me want to start one in order to express ...
May 18, 2011 -
Re: Live
Hi! I definitly liked this poem, it brought up a lot of good questions and emotions that made the poem interesting and engaging. The only thing that I think you ...
May 16, 2011 -
Re: First kiss
I loved this poem and the way it flowed. Your descriptions and imagery were amazing, while there were a couple typos I suggest you just go through and read it ...
May 14, 2011 -
Re: My Dear Person
I really like this poem (I even liked it) it was simple like you were trying to do yet it adresses very deep and controversial topics. This piece was also ...
May 6, 2011 -
Re: Hi My Name Is
Hey I really, really loved this piece it was so unique and different, the idea and content of it was really creative and held a lot of emotion. The only ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Previous Mistakes
Hi! I really liked these lyrics and the way you gave us the link to hear the beat of the song. I listened to that while reading and I thought ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Stuff
I loved this poem it was really fun to read and also it was very simple which made it way more enjoyable! The randomness of it was there but then ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Silent Deceit
Wow, I loved this piece! I didn't notice anything in the lyrics that needed help or editing. Especially how well it was written and I could easily get into the ...
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: Happy Birthday, Teenager
Haha I loved this it was very catch and such a creative idea! I saw nothing wrong with the poem that really bugged me or felt out of place, other ...
Apr 28, 2011 -
Re: A Struggling Wanderer
Hi! I thought this poem was very sad and packed full of emotions, I liked the way you told it like a story which gave it more flow. But I ...
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: A Poet's Land
I loved this poem so much! It created the most perfect image in my head, the rhyming was also really good and flowed really nicely and that is sometimes really ...
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: Between us
Wow I loved this poem! I thought it was so beautiful yet so simple and breath taking! I felt there were parts where there was few punctuation but the content ...
Apr 26, 2011
