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This is a really great piece! I love the way you describe the things in the poem like the water and the stones of despair, also your word choice is ...

Ugly Mirror, Pretty Mirror, Haunting my life; One an elixir, The other a knife. Ugly Mirror, Pretty mirror, My dear love and fear; Pity only one of you Can ever ...

A dark shadow haunts you. It knows your address. It's been watching you undress. It knows your every success, and your every mess. It has been watching your progress, and ...

Mkay, so first chapter of a story i'm writing. The romance will come in most likely during the second or third chapter so keep on reading. The fist chapter is ...

I like this a lot but you should go through and proof read one more time. i see where your coming from when writing i think of the same thing ...

It's longer that stuff I usually write, but here it is.... Think what you want. Burn it if you wish. ---------------------------------- I always thought that when I died, I would ...

I know this sounds strange but this poem makes me want to cry, especially after reading your comment about how your insperation for this poem was from men beating their ...

My edits are in all caps. You have seen my pain and sorrow, YOU HAVE heard my hurt-filled cries. Without a second thought my routine I will follow And treasure ...

My edits are in all caps. Their is blood on the rug, on the dining room chairs, streaked up the walls, it's under the stairs. 1. Blood in the bath ...

My edits are in all caps. " I have a jar of butterflies. would you like to come and see? My favorite is this blue one with green patterns on ...

I liked everything about this the only thing you need to do is go through and fix punctuation mistakes. Sometimes when I read poetry I get stuck on the rythming ...

Okay Baywolf25 I really enjoyed this story and I think you have a great plot, I can clearly see that you put a lot of thought in to this novel ...

I havn't seen any of yours lately nor have I really told you what i think but I liked this one a lot. I dont know if it's just because ...

This is really interesting, i like the names of the characters and the way you begin the story. But you need to go through and re-read it becasue if you ...

Wow I really liked this! I liked how you didn't have punctuation it made it extra special and different. The only thing was I got a tiny bit confused on ...