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  • Lyrics » Realistic, Romantic Re: A Little Bird

    hey there , smiley here for a review in this wonderfull REVIEW DAY!! ;) ok lets start with an overall look ( usually leave it for the end but lets ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Lyrics » Realistic, Dramatic Re: You Can't Hurt Me

    hellooo ok , so this is a very nice song it's reallly expressive ,your choice of words and how it all flows tegether , i find it all good . ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: i love you

    hey there this is truly sweet poem , it's quite enjoyable ... i love how you used such simple expressions and words to write a very comprehensive and brilliant poem ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: To Be Enough

    smile is here as requested so this article is very unique i enjoyed reading it , i liked the "question" style you used it's quite interesting and it makes your ...

    Mar 20, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: A million miles away

    hey there this is a very good poem , full of positivity and supporting , i think that the whole idea of it is interesting and catchy ,the title was ...

    Mar 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Problems i have

    hey there smile is here for a review as requested ok i'll start with nitpicks : i see that you already have comments so i'll try to not repeat what ...

    Mar 18, 2014
  • Other » Realistic, Romantic Re: Crush

    ohhmygod , this is so amazing ,touchy, full of emotions piece , so true , well written and deep , i just loove this kind of writing when you write ...

    Mar 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: An Old Tree Isn't Fragile

    hey there smile is here for a review i'll start by saying that this is a very creative and quite intelligent work , i extremenly liked how you mixed all ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General Re: December

    hello , i would like to say that this song is pretty good and nice , the whole idea of" love..broken heart then moving on" is just soo great which ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Long Nights

    hey there this is soo touchy poem , full of emotions... true ones . "Lying in the bed made for two, I try and close my eyes. I used to ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, General Re: Following the instructions

    helloooo smileis here for a review ok , i must say that this is a great poem so creative and WELL WRITTEN . "Those of us blessed enough to be ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: Are You There?

    hellooo this is a very quite sad and dpressing poem , but WONDERFUL ....the whole idea of "not every friend is a TRUE friend" is awesome , i just LOOVE ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Narrative Re: Broken Hearted

    heyyy so that's not your first poem i read , and like the others it is quite true and full of emotions and kind of deep . i liked the ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Life

    HELLO , SMILE IS HERE FOR A REVIEW so starting with an overall look , i say that it's a very good poem sweet and enjoyable. i liked the whole ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Walk, walk

    hey there i really liked this poem , so interesting idea mysterious and contains lot of SUSPENSE . LETS START WITH POSITIVES 1-the theme , very new and interesting . ...

    Feb 23, 2014


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