slandie

Very Deep !!!! Keep up the Good Work !

I like it !!!!! "You make me when you breathe, and Break me when you stand." Great Job !!!!!!!!!!!

Good....Very Good ...I like it !!!!!!!!!!

Impressing..just WOWWWW ....

Real niceeeeeeeeeeeeee..... I liked it................. ;) slandie

You did an Amazing Work...Great....I loved it !!!!!!!!!!!! Slandie

Excellent !!!!!!!!!! Fantastic !!!!!!!!!! Love it ...Very Beautiful... Slandie

I liked your poem !!!!!!!! I think it's very nice and cool . *_* -_- Slandie

Hey Snoink, That's a part of the poem.....I was trying to show how some of us are selfish in a relationship,As you can she only thinks about herself that's why ...

I loved it !!!!!! It has a deep thing....Niceee EDIT: Hey, Btw it's just a request !!! Can you read mines too ??? Especially "Love : you and him " ...

> Nice poem...Good Job.... *_* Slandie

Thanks......... *_*

Thanks for your advice...I did use some here. What do you think about it now ??Is it more clear ?? Slandie

Hey EmmaJane, Thnx for your advice.Once again you got I made some changes and about this " So ... there's an intruder ... oh, wait; the intruder's the cat ... ...

Creepy and desolate !!!!!!!!!! still it's enthralling....