skorlir

I think that subject-verb pair could be written either way... The argument can be made that "five minutes" is a singular block of time. And it could also be dismissed ...

Yes, and I attempted to preserve that in my suggestions, while still refining some uncertain or poor language. I may not have entirely succeeded. Altogether, like I said, an enjoyable ...

I accept your mild criticism and thank you for your praise. ~Skorlir

Ah... There are reasons I choose to not extend this piece. I have written somewhat longer exegeses on sleep before, ones focused more on dreams and the experience, and less ...

No problem. :)

There are many, many Avatar fans. But you are nonetheless right.

I'm afraid I will not review this until you add stanzas or line breaks. I believe many others will feel the same. Please do that. Thank you, ~Skorlir

The giant-wall-of-text effect I will take credit for, but it was not entirely deliberate. I mean, I tried to format! I tend to avoid mindless drivel, honestly. It's sort of ...

The giant-wall-of-text effect I will take credit for, but it was not entirely deliberate. I mean, I tried to format! I tend to avoid mindless drivel, honestly. It's sort of ...

Well. That was a misuse of I. ... Aley, you're always going to find something wrong. I like that.

Ah, well. Lemony Snicket really has nothing to do with this; he is but loosely related to the theme. Anyway. It's not really meant to be comprehensible, but not incomprehensible ...

I am uncertain that this qualified as a submissable work... Regardless, choosing a title is entirely subjective. And it must be significant to the work at hand. Any of the ...

I understand that it is a little... undefined. I agree. However I contend that the rhymes you pointed out still flow. Absence and glance do rhyme, although the lines do ...

Actually, review day means nothing to me. Don't take it too personally, but I did this just for you. (And for the 150 points. Those are nice.) I know what ...

Oh no. You're one of those dreadful Dickinsonses. Filthy, thieving Dickinsonses. :) Just kidding.