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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Nine

    ShadowTalon- NightWing SeaTalon- SeaWing IceTalons- IceWing (which I remind you, are not blinded by night) Maybe if you’d want more followers, you should try reinventing completely the clans, with d

    Jun 10, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: I'm a Writer-Poem about loving your passion more then yourself

    My friend.. this is amazing (๑>◡

    Jun 9, 2019
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: Pink and Yellow

    This is an interesting story to be sure. I feel like there’s a second meaning behind each word you said, and the writing is definitely well done. We feel the ...

    Jun 9, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Lohikarmen: A tale of humans and dragons (Chapter 6: New life paths)

    this story is my new favorite. i just love the setting, and i also find dragons beautiful beasts, with a temper you carefully describe all throughout your chapter. I have ...

    Jun 9, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Lohikarmen: A tale of humans and dragons (Chapter 5: The Great Hunt)

    My new favorite! Definitely subscribing :) I hope you keep on with the great content. I still have a question tho. This is chapter 5; but the one following is ...

    Jun 9, 2019
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Historical Fiction Re: Little Turtledove (2)

    Absolutely loved it :) I rarely finish a short story, since usually they’re loud, bland and stupid- but this one is quite a read. Now, the setting in the beginning ...

    Jun 9, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Achievement

    RHYMING SCHEME OK, I know my friends usually turn towards me when the teacher talks of writing poems, and I’m probably the first to coldy point out that a poem ...

    Jun 8, 2019
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: What's all the buzz about.

    i appreciate a good story, and this certainly is one of them. We've got stakes, we've got plots, and we've got characters. Until there, all set. Now, even though I ...

    Jun 8, 2019
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: My First Solo

    I really like this story. Unlike casualties, this actually can make us dream- flying is, yes; something of a dream- and the way you describe it is really appreciable. The ...

    Jun 8, 2019
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Greatest King

    Heya Dilbert64- this is what I call a short story. Compelling, short, and yet unforgettable in its way. Now, there only are several points which itches me while reading your ...

    Jun 8, 2019
  • Short Story » Narrative, Spiritual Re: Sight

    Hello hello So to begin with, I really liked this story because the tone is set easily and we feel things for.. Tajiti..? Anyways, if you made a part 2, ...

    Jun 8, 2019
  • Short Story » General, Mystery / Suspense Re: Wrong Call

    Hey there, so; unlike the other reviewers who basically said very thing I wanted to say about the vocabulary; I’ll rather go on about the plots. I think you make ...

    Jun 8, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Lohikarmen: A tale of humans and dragons (Chapter 4: The ritual)

    I cannot express how impressed I am about this. A plot which moves forwards Characters which develop, share, love, hate, have inner conflicts- basically, characters Even though the setting is ...

    Jun 7, 2019
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Red Rose- A Short Story I wrote a few months back and decided to go back to polish it a bit (Final Edit!)

    That story, with the twist at the end.. is.. good.. I mean, we get the tone pretty well, but since there are no actions, and it’s just people talking.. it ...

    Jun 7, 2019
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: A broken friendship

    My friends see me as someone which prefers Stephen King, tumors and gory kills over romance in movies and films, although I also love romance, broke friendships, lost sister stuff ...

    Jun 6, 2019


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
— LCDR Geordi La Forge