silentwords

I really liked this story! It had a strong mood and atmosphere to it, very dark and sad. I also liked how you wrote their "conversation" in a way that ...

I thought this was a really well-written story! I enjoyed it throughout and was drawn in by the first line (: You really portrayed the character perfectly. It was obvious ...

I think you did a really good job with this piece, considering how few words you were limited to (: Even with such a short piece you managed to give ...

I enjoyed reading this story (: The main idea behind the story is kind of over-done... but the way you wrote it made it unique. I like your writing style ...

Wow... This was amazing! I was drawn in immediately by your title. It is just so unique and it screamed to me "read me, read me" ahahahah so of course ...

Wow! I am really liking this story! It is very interesting and I want to keep reading more. You will have to tell me when you post the next chapter ...

Okay, so first off I just wanted to apologize for taking so long to get here! Anyways on to the review... You are a really talented writer! That came across ...

I really liked this poem! I especially liked the idea and story behind it. Something that I think a lot of people can relate to in one way or another. ...

Wow, I really loved this poem! It flowed beautifully throughout. There was also some really strong emotion in here as well! I liked your last verse the best. It really ...

Hey, I just want to start off by welcoming you to YWS! :D If you have any questions, or need something reviewed, feel free to ask me (: Now then, ...

I really liked this poem! The story and idea behind it was very interesting (: I also liked how you put the narrator's additional thoughts in brackets. Gave the poem ...

Ou, I really enjoyed this story! It was really well-written :D It was easy to understand and see everything that was happening. You described everything and used good detail, without ...

Hey (: This was a really well-written story! I enjoyed it :) I have to agree with the other two reviewers: I also thought that Amanda was older. I kind ...

Okay, so I really liked the story behind this poem! I can actually really relate to it. :$ Anyways, I think you had some really good parts, but then some ...

I think you have a really good start here! The story is definetly interesting and kept my attention. You also showed a lot of emotion through the dialouge. With only ...