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Everyone says she wants to be the center of attendtion. but that is not her intention. It comes naturally, and most of the time she doesnt want it. This is ...

When the moon is bigger than the sun, A noise will whisper in your ear, The thing about listing, like this line and the line below, it can show what ...

As with any poem I write, I have no idea if this is worth anything or not. If you think I should scrap it and start again, then I most ...

Ebony skin In ivory halls. What is the point for these first two lines? You give some sort of building and then you drop it. White dusty faces. What is ...

I turn my face from the sun I just can't face facing you anymore Ohh, I like that, face facing you. We've got no time, there's no time for us ...

Why won't the words come? I know how I feel, and yet they are still stuck inside my head. If they're stuck in your head, then you don't need to ...

You all know well the sun the great giver of day. Alright, this is out of flow, since the rest of the stanza or poem for that matter, doesn't really ...

From the day that I met you Until the day that I die My love for you Goes deeper And never goes blind. How does this happen, why does this ...

Shooting stars that wound and hurt That wound? That sounds a bit odd, and you don't need to mention wound and hurt in the same line, it's redundent. Raining clouds ...

My smile fades away as memories tug at the corner of my mind. Is this line needed? Or this stanza even? It goes to reenforce ideas below, and I say ...

My love listen to me I want you to be with me I love you more than my life Please would you be my wife Arg, this is so direct ...

A puppet pulled by her heart strings, Unless the strings do something out of the ordinary, you don't need to mention that the puppet is pulled by them, that's what ...

First off, thanks for inviting me. *refers to be has harsh as possible* A face... God made yours. Your mother carried you for nine months. She didn't get a glimpse ...

It’s like that moment when your entire body is cramped up, and you stretch, muscle by muscle by muscle, back arching like a languid cat. Much better, Much better, I ...

What can I do? Was I right? I made a choice- i thought it was right, This is redundent (drop it), we know you thought it was right because you ...