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Hey, shiney1 here :) This poem speaks the truth! I often lose myself in books and novels and neglect my duties XD But I find that this poem loses its ...

Hey Mikko :) Very interesting poem you have here. The ending made me smile, for isn't that kind of love great? This is an uplifting and calming poem, and you ...

Hey, shiney1 here :) Well, congats on getting featured! But I have to agree with murtuza and Flower~Child on this one. This was more like rambling than a poem. And ...

Welcome to YWS! I'll review this poem for you :) First off, let me say I love the simplicity of this poem. We really need a break for these elaborate ...

Hmm... Honestly I liked and did not like this at the same time. I have to say, this is pretty well-thought through when you look at it. I love the ...

Hey, shiney1 here :) I really like this poem! If this is you when you are not serious, in my opinion, you should be less serious more often! This is ...

Hey SubjectBlue. Very interesting poem you have here. The punctuation is good as far as I can tell, and the rhyming is okay (but some places sound a bit forced). ...

I agree with the above post, that this is too short. I love the first 4 stanzas, which create a happy tune and entice the reader to read more. The ...

Hey, shiney1 here :) Let me just say that I really like this poem. I was intrigued from the beginning, and I never lost interest on the way down. The ...

Hey MeanMrMustard. I have to say that I liked this poem. It had great imagery, explosive yet calm emotion, and was not cliche in format. A bit part of why ...

I agree with the above post that it is a bit too fast-paced and short. There are not even enough context clues to tell that the narrator is a boy, ...

Hey Boo :) Nice poem you've got here. It made me smile, and I wanted to reassure the narrator that, "Yes, He does hear you, honey." I did have a ...

I really like this. This is what I miss, and I totally agree with you. Nowadays some people take it too far, and put barriers as to how elaborate poetry ...

Hey, shiney1 here :) Well, for starters, I like the royal and regal voice in this poem. It does indeed sound like the voice a majestic dragon. Plus, you did ...

Hey Boo :) Let me just say that the imagery you have is very good. You show much improvement that you are more clear on what is going on in ...