Published November 24, 2011
Deleted for plagiarism.
Points:
Time spent:
IP address:
Canary word: Present
Possible AI signals:
Original Text:
Are you sure you want to delete this comment? This cannot be undone.
Mark this comment as a review? Points will be awarded to the poster.
Your comment was posted, but it wasn’t long enough to count as a review. Reviews need about four complete sentences (at least 250 characters). Try writing another review that explains your thoughts in more detail — the author will appreciate it, and you’ll earn points for it.
140,755 Literary Works • 673,687 Reviews
Locked for plagiarism.
Hmm...
Honestly I liked and did not like this at the same time. I have to say, this is pretty well-thought through when you look at it. I love the originality and the smoothness, and it's got attitude, which adds points for voice. I'm glad this is not another one of those annoying cliche break-up sob stories I see so much on YWS.
But, when you really look at this form, I doubt the guy will be the one with the actual problem. A snobbish sounding girl like this will have a pretty tough time finding love if this what she looks at and the attitude she carries around while doing it. Plus, many of these things is what makes a person who they are, so that guy will have to change himself a lot to satisfy her.
But, that is the only problem I, personally, had with this. Overall it's a pretty cool idea.
I love this.. SO MUCH. This part's true with a lot of girls because lots of guys are stupid
But that's not the point here. This was too good. Thanks for writing this.. It made my day!