shieldmaiden

Hey girl! You know my thoughts about this particular chapter...you ripped my heart out when I first read it! And I was absolutely dumbfounded and have lost all trust in ...

Hello Honora! Lovely chapter. First of all, I'm feeling bad for Lee. I sense a lot of hostility coming from his second in command, Timothy. The last thing Lee needs ...

Hello, Sheildmaiden again. This chapter really threw me for a loop. It is so different from the previous one that I had to check the title to make sure that ...

Hello, Shieldmaiden here. I was messaged by a fellow member to check out your story! I was not disappointed. This is an amazing work. I've so many things to go ...

Hey Honora! Amazing chapter! The whispering of the wind gave me chills! I've so many speculations and questions. First, perhaps Elaya has a special power or control of certain elements. ...

Aw, such a touching and sad ending. It really moved me. Already told you this but I have to say it again. I love how Gid teased Elaya. I really ...

As always, your work is stunning. I was a little confused at the beginning with the abrupt change of POV and introduction of a new character, but after it was ...

Wow! This is even better than the last one! I really love your description in this one. Especially when it comes to Ellaya cleaning Gid's wound. Really precise, but not ...

Holy cow! Boy, I do not know how you manage it but this chapter really had me biting my nails. A great way to get a reader hooked...start with a ...

Ah ha!!! Loved the ending. Not that it was a huge surprise, yet that he just came out and said who he was pretty surprising. I wish you hadn't ended ...

Wowy wow wow!!! Boy I'm in love with this story already. I love your main character's sass. She's so funny and lighthearted that she's captured my heart. I really love ...

Impressive detail and observation during the fight. Kept me interested and that's a big deal for me. Love the technique you involved. Sounds realistic to me. I was expecting more ...

Wow. This is really, really good. It really dug deep. And it made me really sad. Jeff is all alone with only a robot for company. Pixa is really well ...

Wow...just wow! This is amazing! I can't believe that someone wrote such great work like this. Honestly it is written so well it feels as if I'm reading an excerpt ...

Wow, boy to I not like those guys right now!!! Sure, he said that he didn't kill her dog. But erasing puppy's memory! That's almost as awful! Poppy won't remember ...