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Re: Thunderfleece Ch-1 – Padlocked Pandemonium
Hey Tort! Shey here for that promised review! Admittedly, I'm not the best at reviewing chapters, since I haven't had much practice, but we'll see where this goes. I really ...
Dec 30, 2017 -
Re: Rainbow
Hey there! Shey here for a review! Overall, I really enjoyed this piece. The concept alone deserves praise, because it's a unique idea, taking the colors of the rainbow and ...
Sep 30, 2017 -
Re: The Dining Table
Hey there! Shey here for a quick review! Overall, this was an enjoyable piece. It was powerful, and resonated within me. I can't personally relate to this work (fortunately), but ...
Sep 29, 2017 -
Re: Trumps Wall
Hey there! Shey here for a review! Overall, I think that you have great ideas for this poem, but had difficulty putting them onto paper. Let's jump right into the ...
Sep 29, 2017 -
Re: Warriors: Rise - Chapter 1
Hey there! Shey here for a review! Another great chapter! The story is progressing, and I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes. Anyways, onto the review! My first comment ...
Sep 28, 2017 -
Re: Warriors: Rise - Allegiances and Prologue
Hey there! Shey here for a review! As promised, I'm here for a good 'ol review on a good 'ol Warriors fanfic. So far I'm looking forward to future chapters, ...
Sep 28, 2017 -
Re: A twist
Hey there! Shey here for a review! First, I'll start by welcoming you to the site! If you ever have any questions, you can ask any names in red or ...
Sep 27, 2017 -
Re: zugzwang
Hey there! Shey here from a review! Overall, another nice work from the sound a mind makes! I'm reviewing this one without a ridiculous headache, so hopefully it'll be more ...
Sep 26, 2017 -
Re: Broken Moonlight
Hey there, Steggy! Shey here for a review! Overall, you've got something nice going here. It's short and sweet, but gets the message across. Hey, that's pretty good not a ...
Sep 26, 2017 -
Re: a part of me died
Hey there! Shey here for a quick review! I have a deadly headache, so don't expect a well-developed review from me, haha. Anyways, here's a quick but maybe somewhat helpful ...
Sep 25, 2017 -
Re: She Said
Hey there, Dracula! Shey here for a review! Overall, this was a nice piece. I get the message you were trying to convey, and I'm a big fan of the ...
Sep 24, 2017 -
Re: My Home
Hey there! Shey here for a review! This piece honestly left me speechless. It was that good. I'm usually pretty critical of poetry, and anything, for that matter, so to ...
Sep 23, 2017 -
Re: autumnal equinox
Hey there, Lupa! Shey here for a review! Overall, I loved this piece. It was short, sweet, and to the point. I enjoyed it. But, I've got comments nonetheless, and ...
Sep 23, 2017 -
Re: Why I Hate The Church
Hey there! Shey here for a review! This was a pretty great piece. It got the message you were trying to convey across very clearly, and I can definitely agree ...
Sep 22, 2017 -
Re: The Great Eye
Hey there! Shey here for a review! Overall, I really liked this piece! It was beautifully descriptive. However, I do still have some comments and complaints, which I'll jump into ...
Sep 21, 2017
