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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Thunderfleece Ch-1 – Padlocked Pandemonium

    Hey Tort! Shey here for that promised review! Admittedly, I'm not the best at reviewing chapters, since I haven't had much practice, but we'll see where this goes. I really ...

    Dec 30, 2017

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Rainbow

    Hey there! Shey here for a review! Overall, I really enjoyed this piece. The concept alone deserves praise, because it's a unique idea, taking the colors of the rainbow and ...

    Sep 30, 2017

  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: The Dining Table

    Hey there! Shey here for a quick review! Overall, this was an enjoyable piece. It was powerful, and resonated within me. I can't personally relate to this work (fortunately), but ...

    Sep 29, 2017

  • Poetry » Humor, Politics
    Re: Trumps Wall

    Hey there! Shey here for a review! Overall, I think that you have great ideas for this poem, but had difficulty putting them onto paper. Let's jump right into the ...

    Sep 28, 2017

  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy
    Re: Warriors: Rise - Chapter 1

    Hey there! Shey here for a review! Another great chapter! The story is progressing, and I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes. Anyways, onto the review! My first comment ...

    Sep 27, 2017

  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy
    Re: Warriors: Rise - Allegiances and Prologue

    Hey there! Shey here for a review! As promised, I'm here for a good 'ol review on a good 'ol Warriors fanfic. So far I'm looking forward to future chapters, ...

    Sep 27, 2017

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative
    Re: A twist

    Hey there! Shey here for a review! First, I'll start by welcoming you to the site! If you ever have any questions, you can ask any names in red or ...

    Sep 26, 2017

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: zugzwang

    Hey there! Shey here from a review! Overall, another nice work from the sound a mind makes! I'm reviewing this one without a ridiculous headache, so hopefully it'll be more ...

    Sep 25, 2017

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Broken Moonlight

    Hey there, Steggy! Shey here for a review! Overall, you've got something nice going here. It's short and sweet, but gets the message across. Hey, that's pretty good not a ...

    Sep 25, 2017

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General
    Re: a part of me died

    Hey there! Shey here for a quick review! I have a deadly headache, so don't expect a well-developed review from me, haha. Anyways, here's a quick but maybe somewhat helpful ...

    Sep 24, 2017

  • Poetry » General, Realistic
    Re: She Said

    Hey there, Dracula! Shey here for a review! Overall, this was a nice piece. I get the message you were trying to convey, and I'm a big fan of the ...

    Sep 24, 2017

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: My Home

    Hey there! Shey here for a review! This piece honestly left me speechless. It was that good. I'm usually pretty critical of poetry, and anything, for that matter, so to ...

    Sep 23, 2017

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: autumnal equinox

    Hey there, Lupa! Shey here for a review! Overall, I loved this piece. It was short, sweet, and to the point. I enjoyed it. But, I've got comments nonetheless, and ...

    Sep 23, 2017

  • Short Story » Culture, Humor
    Re: Why I Hate The Church

    Hey there! Shey here for a review! This was a pretty great piece. It got the message you were trying to convey across very clearly, and I can definitely agree ...

    Sep 22, 2017

  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic
    Re: The Great Eye

    Hey there! Shey here for a review! Overall, I really liked this piece! It was beautifully descriptive. However, I do still have some comments and complaints, which I'll jump into ...

    Sep 21, 2017


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