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Omg Parker will you write songs for me? I REALLY WANT TO STEAL THIS! You're use of words is amazing and you did very well at rhyming. I really love ...

This is definitely a morbid and cruel tale but you manage to sell it with a well structured form of writing :) However in the last paragraph, try to cut ...

I couldn't agree more. It's hard to find people that understand this and even harder to find people that care. I'm in a relationship now that I do know for ...

Quite the story Parker :) I love your writing skills. You should probably still work on that emotionless dialog :P You need to make them sound like they are feeling ...

I want to applaud your great skill at creating a story line :) I know it's a given for a writer but having that skill alone is an accomplishment :) ...

Well first I want to applaud your epic story line creation!! :) Second, I agree with KatGirl about your flow. However it isn't necessarily that big of a deal. It ...

This read left me so intrigued! I'm excited for the continuation of this tale. Your skill in narrating flashback scenes in excellent and I love how you portray the emotions ...

Your epic emphasis on detail and emotion is absolutely perfect! As a reader who completely enjoys a good novel now and again, I know what a good novel takes. Girl, ...

I am hooked! I am really hoping to see the next chapter. Your way of explaining things is exquisite and so understandable. I, as the reader, was able to feel ...

Well I love your excellent dialog and story creating skills, however there was one big problem I as a writer find myself in all of the time. It simply moves ...

Besides your lack of capitalization at the beginning of sentences, your writing skills are exquisite. It definitely displays emotion to to the reader very well. I am in love with ...

This is really creative and understandable. I really love the line "I slit my wrists with the pills and I swallowed the knife." With so many meanings it could be ...

I am simply wowed by your amazing song writing skills. You really have the power to get emotions across with your words. As a child whom grew up without the ...

This is incredibly deep. In my opinion it reaches just that right spot in the musical soul to be inspiring. If recorded to a good tune, you could definitely find ...