shaniac

Hello, shaniac here to review your poem! I'm liking the overall theme you've presented in this poem as well as the slight hints of description that happen here and there. ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your poem for Poetry Exchange! I first want to say that this poem evokes a lot of raw descriptions and I'm genuinely living for it, ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your piece! I like the letter format you decided to go with. Most importantly, I am curious about who Carnax is. I think it would ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your piece! The first thing I want to focus on is the beginning. Usually, when you write anything, you want to grab the reader's attention ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your poem! Haha, I remember you mentioning this in the Discord server -- in fact, I was there when you guys were hatching this parody. ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your piece! I like the diary approach of this because I don't know a lot of works on the site that write in this format, ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your poem! Okay so, fair warning, I have never read a Spanish poem (I did take 4 years of Spanish in high school, but my ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your piece! Note: I haven't read the previous chapter(s) so if I miss or get anything wrong, do let me know. Right off the bat, ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your piece! I really like how you started this piece out -- because you get to the narrator's point as well as the small descriptions ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your poem! I think I've read a bit of 'what is this life' poetry from time to time, so let me take a stab your ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your poem! The title really caught my attention -- it kind of reminded me of a song title that I used to listen a lot ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your piece! When you start of a prologue with dialogue or any chapter really, it can be kind of confusing because you are introducing a ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your piece! I'm really digging this chapter! There was a lot of descriptions, character development, and that ending is kind of a cliffhanger. I do ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your piece! I really enjoyed reading this short story. You've done a nice job with bringing out the characters and even at the ending, showing ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your piece! You start off with bringing in a character that isn't even mentioned yet nor have you stated who the narrator is. I suggest ...