shanan-cat

Oh my, sorry you replied so long ago!! Thanks a lot! I really appreciate it :)

Other than the corrections previously stated, this was really good and I read it like it was a rap, which I've never really done before. I don't know if that ...

I meant "keep it up." -the cat

I really enjoyed reading that, but I felt that a few of your sentences were quite a mouthful and took a long time until they rhymed: "Bids me to pardon ...

Sorry, I typed that really fast. I meant: "Everytime I see you, I can't explain The fever boiling through my brain, ect." And also: "The Sun is on rise and ...

Hey, I do what I can to help. :D

Thanks guys for the comments. Is there anything that you think I could improve? Do I nees more detail? Should I make it longer?

Sorry it's been so long since I've been on, I only have time to do so many things. Thanks a lot for th reviews, everyone! This piece I wrote in ...

Thanks a lot guys. I will definitely take all your advice and alter the layout, punctuation and flow of the poem, but just to let you all know, I did ...

I wish you could find something better to talk about than love. Love found. Love lost. Love taken. Love given. Love forbidden. Love ignored. I am tired of "love" as ...

That was truly amazing , my friend! Good work!

Thanks people! So, do you really like it? Is it too grotesque?

Still you edited it, and still you keep it sounding the same: jumbled and all. It still think that it could use some more work, and with that, you could ...

Please, for all people posting things, noy only in this forum, but please, please capitilize ALL your sentences at the berginnings. That goes the same for your "i"s too. Just ...

Very dramatic, but nicely done! I have nothing to say, but can I print this?