shahinaz

Loved this piece! Almost gives me a poetry slam vibe! something i would expect from a spoken word artist perhaps? I would only recommend increased poetic techniques as a means ...

beautiful use of diction and i love the way you speak of love manifesting more evidently in distress. the structure was great and your emotions came through very evocatively, i ...

loved the use of paradox and contrast in this poem! perfectly titled, life consists of alot of random inexplicable moments that don't really fit into any sort of moral or ...

Very evocative, I felt that your emotional investment in the story compensated greatly for your nontraditional somewhat discombobulated formatting, it edged me on to the close and kept me reading. ...

Beautiful depiction of love lost. It speaks of breaking up in such a poetic yet simultaneously "matter of fact" way. The beautiful and turbulent nature of love is described at ...

I love the fact that you are bringing light to the repetitive nature of certain poetic themes. Its almost like you acknowledge that fact that poetry can consist of recurring ...

Although this is not technically a poem it does posses certain poetic qualities. It came across to me more as a statement or speech of profound derivation. It speaks on ...

Very interesting perspective on time. I like how unlike other poets you don't discard the idea of time as an existing concept, as most opt for the "time does not ...