secretrose29

Thank you so much for your lovely comment!!!

This is quite interesting! It’s a bit short,so I don’t have much criticism. The only criticism I have is that you were quite vague about what is ‘it’. Is ‘it’ ...

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This is quite interesting! It’s a bit short,so I don’t have much criticism. The only criticism I have is that you were quite vague about what is ‘it’. Is ‘it’ ...

Great job!

This poem really gave me goosebumps; you perfectly convey how love can have a dark side as well. However, I noticed two lines that didn’t really match the overall character ...

This poem really gave me goosebumps; you perfectly convey how love can have a dark side as well. However, I noticed two lines that didn’t really match the overall character ...

Oops, I didn%u2019t think about that before! I will try considering it; thank you for your prompt reply and feedback!

Hi Honora, thank you so much for your feedback! Anyways, my second chapter will be set from a fifteen year old Olivia%u2019s point of view; will it be alright to ...

It%u2019s okay, I do that all the time! It happens!

Thank you so much zeldalex!

Maths is the subject I’m worst at; I feel your pain! I like your sense of humor in this poem, you are so sporting! I think it flows very well ...

Great job!

I hope to see more of your writing soon!

Hi, of course I don%u2019t mind you asking! I usually play all kinds of classical music pieces that my music teachers assign me on the violin. I%u2019m now currently playing ...