Hi @Meghaji I am here to do a review on you poem.
Things that I think need work
Okay so I joge a poem on how long it is, I can see that this poem is three lines long, I would say that maybe two more lines would have worked a bit better for this poem.
What needs a little ficksing
more full stops this time at the end though, so maybe you did need those ones there. any ways I just feel like this needs more to it.When the person takes different path for success...okay I don't really get why the full stops are there, I don't really think that you need them there.It's their mistake if they can't understand the path...
but I do think you did a good job of the lines that you have don't get me wrong about that, this is really good I think for just though's lines, I hop you get more likes on this soon.
So that is all that I can say, If I came across as being to harsh on you then I am really sorry pleas for give me for it, So keep up the grate poem writing, I hop to read more.
@EagleFly out to Seek and Kill
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