When the person takes different path for success...
People call him 'diverted'
It's their mistake if they can't understand the path...
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Hi @Meghaji I am here to do a review on you poem.
more full stops this time at the end though, so maybe you did need those ones there. any ways I just feel like this needs more to it.Things that I think need work
Okay so I joge a poem on how long it is, I can see that this poem is three lines long, I would say that maybe two more lines would have worked a bit better for this poem.
What needs a little ficksing
but I do think you did a good job of the lines that you have don't get me wrong about that, this is really good I think for just though's lines, I hop you get more likes on this soon.
So that is all that I can say, If I came across as being to harsh on you then I am really sorry pleas for give me for it, So keep up the grate poem writing, I hop to read more.
@EagleFly out to Seek and Kill
Happy Review Day!!
I hope to see more of your writing soon!
This is really true Meghaji! I believe that there are many ways to become successful, it kind of works in the same way as when you are traveling on the road to reach a destination. There are many alternative routes we can take, but it depends on which one works best for us.
The only thing I would ask you to improve on would be the first line: there’s a slight grammatical error. It’s supposed to be: When the person takes a different path for success.
Good job, keep it up!
secretrose29
Thank you so much for ur review......I will surely work on it.!!!!