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The Curse Of The Midnight Melody: Chapter One

Spring had just arrived in the neighborhood of Willow Lane. Nature's life had been renewed after the agony of winter, and its gradually flourishing beauty was a joy to witness. Flower buds were peeking at the world around them, while preparing to blossom in all their glory. Trees had thrown off their coats of snow, and were clothing their branches in young, glistening leaves. The wind had ceased its harsh, warlike wintertime dance, and was now dancing blithely and gracefully everywhere.

Willow Lane was a quaint neighborhood made up of mansions whose immense hugeness made them appear as formidable as the sights of strict, impatient schoolteachers are to their pupils. There was also a small park, and a playground which, most interestingly, was completely painted in a bright shade of yellow.

It was a quiet Sunday morning, for most of the residents had adhered to their habit of sleeping in every weekend. The only people who were out of their houses were some cheeky children, who were attempting to climb an oak tree; and a beautiful lady who stood in the sprawling garden of house number thirty-three.

That lady's slender arms were adorned with exquisite diamond bracelets; and she wore a thin sapphire-blue dress which had a long, flowing skirt. Her black hair rippled in lusciously thick waves down her erect back; and she had a tiny heart-shaped face with delicate rosebud lips. The most striking aspects of her beauty were her expressive brown eyes, which were framed with gorgeously long eyelashes; and her radiant golden-brown skin.

All her neighbors secretly admired her not only for her beauty and wealth, but also for her brains: she was a brilliant scientist whose astonishing discoveries had been published in several renowned scientific journals; and they had also garnered international commendation.

Everyone who knew her thought her life was the very reincarnation of perfection, but they were wrong.

Her name was Katie Wu; and she was trying to lift her low spirits by observing the positive changes that spring had wrought in the appearance of her garden. However, it didn't work: her heart was becoming heavier with the knowledge that her husband, Jake Gates, was leaving home in a day's time, and would most probably not return for many long months.

She sighed, and then brushed away the tears spilling from her eyes. Then a voice in her head started chiding her for not being stronger. It kept shrieking: "Stop crying! After all, Jake serves in the army; and in the whole decade you'd lived with him, he would leave you behind for long periods almost every year; shouldn't you be used to it by now?"

"I'm definitely used to it now," she thought aloud, trying to comfort herself, "but that doesn't mean my grief at his absence will completely fade. I've known all this while that being a soldier's wife isn't easy anyway. Of course it's hard sometimes when I think of him fighting on the battlefield, and how he might....might never return from there. But he loves his job, so I'll be as encouraging as I possibly can."

The voice in her head immediately fell silent.

Feeling better, she lost all desire to remain in the garden any longer, and decided to head back into her home.

Tall weeds tickled the calves of her legs as she strolled back, prompting her to make a mental note to weed the garden once she had some spare time in the evening. Soft rays of sunlight caressed her already sun-kissed skin, giving it an even brighter glow. A huge smile spread across her face as she stopped to cuddle her two beloved Golden Retrievers, Mina and Tina.

Upon arriving in the living room, she was greeted by the sight of her one-year old daughter, Olivia, running around as her nanny, Julie, and Jake watched her, looking amused.

But the moment Jake noticed Katie's presence, he jumped out from his armchair and strode towards her, suddenly looking worried.

He gently grasped her hand and whispered: "Sweetheart, I've something important to tell you; is it okay if we talk about it in our room? I've asked Julie to mind Olivia for a while."

"Alright", said Katie, knowing that it was probably something very urgent, for she'd rarely seen Jake being as secretive or looking as worried as he was now.

They hurried up the long, winding staircase to their room, and Jake locked the door once they were inside.

"I'll start by asking you several questions before I tell you anything, are you alright with that?" said Jake.

"Go on, ask me as many as you like," said Katie.

Questions? I've never heard him starting a conversation with questions before....this is weird! Katie thought, as she watched Jake anxiously pacing up and down.

"Have you heard any odd sounds in the house lately? For instance, have you heard people muttering, but they sound so garbled you can't even tell what they're talking about? Did you hear the walls being knocked upon without seeing anyone doing it? Have you?" said Jake.

Katie nearly laughed when she heard what Jake asked; she couldn't believe her ears! She'd thought it was something much more serious than this; weren't unusual noises just an unimportant matter? However, she had heard exactly all the unusual noises that Jake had described, so she choked down a laugh and replied him as seriously as she could.

"Actually, I have heard these strange noises; they've been around all the while we've lived here," said Katie. "No offense, but may I know why are you so worried about that? To me, that's just a trivial matter."

" Oh, Katie, you'd never believe me if I told you the reason.....you'd never, never, never! But I've no choice but to tell you, it involves the safety of Olivia and you. Maybe you might believe me after all...." Jake muttered.

"Jake, what do you mean?" asked Katie, who was getting increasingly puzzled.

"Katie....there was a curse on this house. Our old neighbor Mr Williams only told me the story when I told him I was leaving home soon, around a week ago. The story goes like this: around ten years ago, the first occupants of this house was a widow, Mrs Spencer, and her three children, Tom, Ellen, and Danielle. After a year of living here, they started to hear the strange sounds I described to you: garbled whispering; the wall being knocked...but they didn't think too much about it -until one day, the sounds became deafening when they were all in their rooms at midnight. An eerie melody started playing, and suddenly, Tom ran out of his room and started screaming, and before Mrs Spencer could stop him....he vanished in front of her eyes! She was so distraught that she moved out after a week, but thankfully she left a warning for the next occupants with Mr Williams. She told him that on the night before they moved out, a threatening voice that sounded out of nowhere told her that it would come back to haunt the child of the next occupants of this house. And if you're wondering why her other children didn't suffer the same fate as Tom, it was because she made sure that she locked and barricaded their bedroom doors every night. So even though the eerie melody played every night and bewitched them to stay awake, they could not fall under its curse to entice them out of their rooms. I know that you probably think this story is nonsense, but is it too much for me to ask you to take the same precautions as Mrs Spencer by locking and barricading Olivia's bedroom door every night?" said Jake, breathless by the time he finished explaining his long story.

"I will lock and barricade Olivia's bedroom door every night, since that's what you want me to do and it's not a difficult task either....but I'm sorry to say I don't really believe this story, Jake. Why would you believe it? It doesn't seem quite like you to believe such a story," replied Katie.

"The main reason I believe it is because Mr Williams is one of the most truthful people I've ever met. And according to him; Mrs Spencer was an extremely down to earth; no nonsense kind of lady. It seems unlikely that she would make up such an extraordinary story."

"Ah, I see."

There was a few minutes of awkward silence as they sat on the bed gazing at each other, each of them trying to guess what the other was thinking.

"Anyways, putting this story aside, I've just realized how much I'm going to miss you when you leave tomorrow," said Katie quietly.

"I miss you like crazy every time I'm away from you...it's just that nobody knows what I'm feeling on the inside," said Jake lovingly, coming slightly closer to her.

As the deliciously cool spring breeze blew through the open window, Katie gently laid her head on Jake's shoulder, feeling the comforting warmth of his body and gazing into his clear blue eyes, thinking how much she loved him and how much she would miss him when he was gone. Jake combed his fingers through Katie's long, lustrous jet-black hair, enjoying this special time he had alone with her, while trying not to think how it might be one of the last times he would ever see her.

***

Six months later, Katie received the devastating news that Jake had passed away from a traumatic brain injury he had received while fighting in the battlefield. She was horrified and dismayed, but she tried to behave as normally as possible and get on with life.

Olivia's bedroom door was still locked and barricaded every night, but she did it purely in memory of Jake; for it was the last request he'd ever given her, rather than because she believed in the story of the eerie melody. She'd never even heard it, and she could never bring herself to believe the story about it, no matter how hard she tried.

But the story about the curse of the eerie melody was true.

And Olivia would discover the mystery behind it, with the help of a friend, when she was fifteen years old.

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shieldmaiden
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What - NO! The husband dies, and I'm very sad. Which goes to show what a great job you did. I was so invested in Jake's life because I saw how much Katie loved him and how happy she was when she was near him. The ghost story was enticing and really exciting. I kept expecting something terrifying to happen to Olivia as a little child. But now I'm interested and intrigued to learn the story behind the ghosts since Olivia will be fifteen. A good age - young enough to be naive but old enough to take care of herself. Having children in ghost stories terrifies me enough to stop reading. I hate having young ones being preyed upon by phantoms since they are so helpless. Keep writing. I look forward to reading what happens to Olivia.

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EmilyCollins Comment

Thank you for writing such a beautiful beginning to this story. It was obviously well planned and well though out. I myself love writing so I do wish you could’ve kept some background on the father before “killing him off.” I do love the way you described the setting and people, though you didn’t really describe Olivia nor the father. You should edit a bit and describe them too so when Olivia is fifteen, readers can sort of have an idea of how she might turn out later. This is truly a wonderful beginning and you should keep writing!

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EmilyCollins Comment

Thank you for writing such a beautiful beginning to this story. It was obviously well planned and well though out. I myself love writing so I do wish you could’ve kept some background on the father before “killing him off.” I do love the way you described the setting and people, though you didn’t really describe Olivia nor the father. You should edit a bit and describe them too so when Olivia is fifteen, readers can sort of have an idea of how she might turn out later. This is truly a wonderful beginning and you should keep writing!

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EmilyCollins Review

Thank you for writing such a beautiful beginning to this story. It was obviously well planned and well though out. I myself love writing so I do wish you could’ve kept some background on the father before “killing him off.” I do love the way you described the setting and people, though you didn’t really describe Olivia nor the father. You should edit a bit and describe them too so when Olivia is fifteen, readers can sort of have an idea of how she might turn out later. This is truly a wonderful beginning and you should keep writing!

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EmilyCollins Comment

This was such a good beginning; I really wished you would’ve given a little more time for the father to stay alive but I loved how you worded every single bit of it. The details are extraordinarily beautiful. Keep writing, my fellow writer and you might have a killer novel on your hands!😁 I wish you luck when you finish this wonderful story.

Thank you so much for your lovely comment!!!



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