secretemogirl21

hey Nice poem good work. I really only have one thing wrong with it( this is in my opinion so you don't have to listen) but the last two lines ...

Hey First id like to say great. There's not may things you need to change, but this is my opinion and you don't have to listen to what I say ...

Hey First of all great work( is this your first piece of work) if it is it's great so keep it up. In my opinion this is great there is ...

Hey First of all great poem ( I also like the name lol) the poem has great flow. Its a great poem don't listen to people who says your poem ...

Hey First of all i'd like to say wow, great job keep it up the way your going your going to have a great collection of poems. I think this ...

Hey First of all id like to say this is a great poem. But something's may need to be improved such as making it a little longer even if you ...

Hey First id like to say love the poem, it basically has everything a poem needs. Id like to read more of your work. So keep it up. But one ...

hey wonderful that's all I have to say. id like to give you some tips if that's okay but you don't have to listen to them if you don't want ...

hey all I have to say is wow this is amazing, you have get techniques. everything in this poem means something. you have hurt, sadness in the poem with I ...

hey love the poem words have been put together great ( by the way everything seems great in the poem but there are a few things that may need to ...

hey first of id like to say I love it great work keep it up. you have done some great work. but there are a few things you may consider ...

hey this is a great poem but it may need a little bit of work( this is just in my opinion so you don't have to take this in to ...

hey first I would like to say this is a great poem( one of the best iv read and iv read about 5 today so congrats on that. I have ...

hey got a review for you. I love this poem but there are some things needing to be change( this can be fixed really easy. 1. slight improvement in the ...