seawolf

Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Hello, I hope you are well! Top Graham Cracker - What I Know This poem is very beautiful. I've read ...

First off, I really like the font. The fact that your scared of drowning as seen in your other poems really helps with context of this poem. Not really any ...

This poem is honestly so beautiful. I feel like its something that deeply resonates with me. The part about the cycles felt so relatable. "I was simply torn into existence" ...

i really need points mb chat This poem really captures the complex feelings of growing up and the deep connections we have with nature and ourselves. It starts off with ...

I really like this! It's super unique. As many people have said, it reminds me of the song "Telephone" by Lady Gaga. I like how fun it is to read ...

Ok so, I really loved the story! It was so good! I love warriors. But, there were a few errors. First, this sentence “No,” Smoke said, ”I want to get ...

I really like the story so far. I will 100% be keeping up with it. I like the description and language you used. I can't notice any issues, so if ...

Hi! I got hooked into this with the first line! I love the description and the detail. It was going smoothly until I saw this part: It was the summer ...

I really like this! I like how it shows the little cursor at the end because it seems like there's more to be said or maybe she's scared to say ...

I was scrolling through the greenroom and woah this title hooked me! Extra point for that!!! I really like how the poem is on the moth picture! I like the ...

Ok so its a pretty good plot but, there are some gramatical and typographical errors, the pacing is not very good and doesn't flow in my opinion. I liked the ...

I love the story so far! It got me hooked!!! I would recommend using a larger variety of words because the repetition can be boring. I'll give an example: "She ...