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Scify for a review! Ok, i know this section is for shorts but this SHORT. But thats not important :3 "...got dark. I miss that." You don't need to make ...

Alright, big gladiator fan I am. Ok, first thing I'm seeing is that your switching between past and present tense. You need to pick one and stick with it. I ...

Alright, not bad. I'm not the biggest Star Wars fan but I like it as much as the next guy. "...assassin known as Jen’gar out." I would put a comma ...

Hey there, Scify for a review. This is very good but you do need to revise it. The first real issue is that first paragraph. You should really split it ...

Hey there, Love this story, big Skyrim fan am I. However, "I had stolen some jewelled necklaces..." It should be "jeweled". "I had found a masterkey..." it should be "master ...

Not bad, not bad. A few things though, '“I don’t deserve this just for being who I am! Let me go!' This sentence is missing the closing quotations, simple mistake. ...

Scify for a review! Hey, this is very sad, I actually teared up and that is EXTREMELY rare for me. One thing I see with poetry is that they forget ...

Ok, this is probably a dumb question but I have to ask, is the narrator a woman? I noticed at the top it says "stilettos" and the only stilettos I ...

This is very cute. I'm wondering if this is supposed to be an American Indian story or something of that nature, the names and overall feeling of the story give ...

Ok. Very cool idea and one of my favorite quests in Skyrim. First off, this is a LONG chapter, which isn't a bad thing but it can make it hard ...

Ok, I like this. Very smooth and relaxing. But this is a review. First thing, you're missing a LOT of periods. You're starting new sentences without finishing the previous, Ex. ...

Badass my friend. I like this a lot. However, this a review. First thing, when Ralof tells the theif to 'watch his tongue' you start a new paragraph when the ...

*Claps* Very good. Saphira sounds like a natural bad-ass I'd like to get to know. But this is a review. The 2nd and 3rd sentences of the first paragraph, i ...

Ok, big Skyrim fan i am, and especially the Dark Brotherhood. This is really cool but you do have some things to correct. the word "sanctuary" should be capitalized. "in ...

Ok, personally I think this fits under comedy but for all i know this is actually a true story. In the 6th paragraph near the end "i realized i was ...