scarlettshimmer

I loved this piece! It was an absolute treat to read. I am a huge fan of this genre so this instantly caught my attention. I love how you used ...

This is so cool! I am a big fan of this genre so this instantly caught my attention. I love how you use different literary techniques to show people’s emotions ...

Oh my god, this is awesome! I love zombies, vampire, werewolves and that sort of genre so this story almost instantly caught my attention. I love how you used a ...

Wow! This is so cool! I am actually a huge fan of the horror and spooky story genre so this almost instantly caught my attention. I love the initial idea ...

Yet again you continue to amaze me with this piece! I loved your take on a second part of this story, which definitely added to its authenticity and interest. Like ...

This is incredibly cool! I love how you used a different writing style to indicate simple things such as speech and movement in the story, and also how you described ...

Omg, I love this piece. The aspect and idea of it are so interesting and I love the way you described the emotions of a single person in a variety ...

Wow, this is amazing! I love the amount of detail and personification used to describe the emotions of the characters. There weren't too many grammar, spelling, or punctuation errors, so ...

This is absolutely beautiful! I love how you personify the words to make the emotions of the message more noticeable, and I love the way you also described the place ...

I love your ideas for this! It is something I would totally read in my spare time and are absolutely positive others would as well. Not too many errors as ...

This is amazing! I love the amount of detail you put into the emotions and descriptions of the events unfolding in the story. "The sound of falling debris suffocated the ...

Wow, this is incredible. You nailed it with this piece, not only with horror ideas but with grammar and the description of emotion. I love the usage of vocabulary and ...

WOW, this is really cool! The sincereness and ideas of this, though it is very short, cannot be overlooked. It demonstrates a powerful message, but one that I completely agree ...

I love your idea for this story! Just a few minor things to fix. Some basic grammar, punctuation, and spelling things, mainly with telling the story in the past tense. ...

I love how you use different kinds of unique word choice to explain the thoughts of the main character. I also like how you describe the book and it’s contents ...