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Hey HighTop! I loved this poem, and it's shortness. I'm guessing you're giving a try for the November contest going on! I am curious as to why you did not ...

Hi Cailey! While your attempt at a short poem did result in a decent length, I felt that you need to cover the subject matter in a more philosophical, maybe ...

Hey 567ajt! I loved your work! It's very commendable, and overall amazing! Your diction is great throughout, and your flow is great too. I often fooled myself into thinking I ...

Hi WiteOak! You have the fundamentals to a very good poem. I enjoyed most the concept, that everyone has heard of, but is never truly advocated for to the extent ...

Hey fortis! Initially, by reading the title, I did not expect the theme of this poem to be what it actually was! I was actually pleasantly surprised. I love the ...

Hey DefyingGravity! I really liked this poem! It's very simple, but I enjoyed that as well! I can't find anything wrong with it. You use great juxtaposition, anaphora, repetition, it's ...

Hey niteowl! I found this poem slightly amusing overall. I don't feel the line with parenthesis is necessary, for you can always imply this. Good job on being consistent with ...

Hi Tay! I'm actually quite fond of this haiku! I'm curious, what would be the title of this haiku rather than "First attempt at haiku"? This is very mysterious, and ...

Hi JcSmooth! Right off the bath, I would suggest changing "haunts" to "taunts". You categorized this poem under Dramatic, so that slight vocabulary change might help you reach this effect. ...

Hi Writer! I loved everything about this. It was intriguing, well written, amusing, and adopted a little bit of charismatic romance! I look forward to reading the rest. This is ...

Love love love this poem! It captures everything about poetry and society in about 3 stanzas, and that is an accomplishment itself! You do a very good job of connecting ...

Hi DreamWork! I felt that this was a good poem, but you could do much more with it! I'm not sure if it is a typo, but in line 2 ...

Hi Taylor! You have a great idea going here, especially after reading the summary you provided! I love that you use a lot of dialogue between your characters, but I ...

Unlike Caroleen, I did not see the depth it this poem. I thought it was very simple. However, I did like it's raw, simple structure. But if you are matching ...

This poem is flawless, filled with emotion, and raw beauty people actually fail to recognize these days. The pain behind this is so evident, it forces the reader to become ...