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  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Crushes Can Crush You

    This is REALLY good. I love

    Sep 30, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: Happiness

    This is really good! The only thing I did not and still do not understand or comprehend is this: "I was raining" Is it supposed to be the word "it"? ...

    Sep 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Chrysanthemum

    THIS IS SO FREAKING SAD AND SO FREAKING AWESOME! I want to cry and I want to smile. I'm smile-crying. I love you word choice! Truth be told, I really ...

    Sep 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Ode To My Significant Other

    haha thanks so much! :)

    Sep 28, 2014
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Ode To My Significant Other

    Thank you sooo much! I will look at the mistake you mentioned. Maybe you're right :)

    Sep 28, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: The first betrayal

    K! The plural things totally cool. And I soooo will! ;)

    Sep 27, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Stupid Heart [Part 2]

    Great :)

    Sep 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Ode To My Significant Other

    Aww thanks so much!

    Sep 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: A Word of Advice

    :)

    Sep 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Satire, Lyrical Re: You Can Hate Me but Not as Much as I Hate Myself

    This is exactly what a teenager's life is all about. Going along with other people's dumb actions to forge friendships that are worth absolutely NOTHING. I completely appreciate and agree ...

    Sep 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: I Never Want to Be Beautiful

    I completely enjoyed this piece. Gorgeous writing, all so true.

    Sep 20, 2014


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