sarebear

Hey Rock, I'm just loving your novel here. I've never followed one through before...but I think I'd like to. First, as usual, I have some nitpicks. I don’t even remember ...

Hey there, I'm not entirely sure how to review this as I imagine you don't really care about spelling or grammar, but I can give you my impressions.... I like ...

Hey there, First of all, I really liked your opening sentence. I thought you were beginning with the classic "character is bleeding and near death" intro but I liked how ...

Hey there, First of all, I loved this. You've taken a used topic and made something new and beautiful, very moving. Your simple style of writing is very stream-of-consciousness without ...

Hey Rosey, First of all, I love the way you open the story. That first sentence is just vague enough to be intriguing, detailed enough to show the reader what ...

Hey there, First of all, nice job. I was impressed by how well you stuck with this and followed it all the way through to the end, so kudos. I'm ...

I am totoally in there with smylin!!!!!!! As my friend said when I showed it to her, this is "epic to epic proportions"! I have no nitpicks. I have nothing ...

Hey plastic! Wow you're old. I've never met anyone who was 99 before. Anyways, this is a very nice poem! It is short, sweet, and to the point. One thing ...

Hey there, I really liked this! A clever and pretty original concept! I actually don't have any grammatical errors-this was very good, few if any typos. Your prose is pretty ...

Hey Karzkin, I like this a lot! Very nice job! Especially powerful is your very last line--stunning and a perfect closing to a great poem! There is one thing here ...

Hi there, This is extremely well done! You really seem to have a grasp of poetry, rhyme, and meter. Good job! One thing I would suggest is for you to ...

Hi there, This is very beautiful. The title captivated me immediately! I have a few corrections: Not happy anymore, dont want anything, go way. Don't should be apostrophized (just made ...

Hello there, First of all, I don't really understand Melissa's position in the social hierarchy of school. It's unusual to have a perfect pretty girl who is considered a mean ...

This is really beautiful. Like, really, really beautiful. Like, totally fantastic! I loved it! LOVED IT! There is one typo in it: then waided in to your knees, should be ...

Hey there, Nice work on this. The emotion in it is very evident. If you don't mind terribly, I will pick at your poem, as creativemuse put it. Am I ...