samii27

What a beautiful peom! I loved it! The only thing I would change is the second line: The more I think, the more it remains clear that I'd go through ...

There are few poems on this website that bring out such emotion as your has done for me. Sitting here reading that now has bought tears to my eyes. You ...

Very deep and intriguing. Some of the lines had me a bit confused while others made me think "Wow, I wish I'd thought of writing that!" The first line I'm ...

First of all, I dont like the repitition of the words: You’ve done something different with your hair. I prepare for the worst, Second, I LOVE the line: Knowing I ...

Nice poem! A bit slow moving and short. I would recommend that you use a bit more enthusiasm and let your inspiration run wild. It looks like you've just put ...

A bit bland to start with, some of the words used didn't really have any effect on me. But towards the end your writing skills began to show. I loved ...

What a beautiful peom! I loved the last bit: I hope they’ll understand me I am adrift And: I touch the clouds in the sky I worry the worlds im ...

Very creative and deep. I LOVED IT. I liked the way you used words and put them together to create feeling. My favourite lines that capture me most are: For ...

First of all, I found most of this poem boring. The only bit that really caught my attention was: My name is written in blood No one else's is, just ...

A perfect example of what a poem should look and sound like! Perfect use of words, perfect describing. I especially like the last part: Though perfect to look at Th ...

Fantastic! Very engaging for your readers and easy to follow. There was only one mistake I could make out: 1. “Before you get comfy is this house, I must introduce ...

I feel as if I can relate to this poem. It shows a persons deepest feelings and it captures many hearts. Even now, as I sit here, tears threaten to ...

At the start of your poem I was thinking "This is just going to be one of those predicatable and obvious poems" but by the end I had changed my ...

I have never come across a vampire poem before, but yours was fantastic! The only problem I find is that I know many people hate vampires, so they will dislike ...

There are some writers who are born to capture hearts with their writing, and you are one of them. One day you will be a great author or poet, whichever ...