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Re: The Letter to the Guide - Chapter 2
Hi, Horisun, Thanks for taking a gander at my story! I was indeed struggling to write from two different perspectives or voices. I've (hopefully) fixed that in the subsequent chapter! ...
Thu Jul 07, 2022 10:58 am -
Re: Letter to the Guide - Chapter 1
Thank you so much!
Thu May 05, 2022 11:00 am -
Re: Letter to the Guide - Chapter 1
Thank you very much for the review! I'll certainly put 'show not tell' to the list of stuff I need to work on! Best of luck on the literature exam!
Tue May 03, 2022 1:14 pm -
Re: Letter to the Guide - Chapter 1
Hi Andrew, I loved reading your thoughts on my story. Well, yes, the story is overdramatic (in some places, intentionally so). I do understand the point about her knowing after ...
Mon May 02, 2022 4:32 pm -
Re: The Click of A Button
Okay, thanks for letting me know. It was kind of hastily put together, this, yes, wasn't what I was expecting. I might revise this and post the fleshed-out version in ...
Fri Apr 01, 2022 12:18 pm -
Re: Sarah's The Kind Dog
Thanks
Fri Feb 04, 2022 12:28 pm -
Re: Sarah's The Kind Dog
Ok, thanks!
Fri Feb 04, 2022 12:28 pm -
Re: A Piece of My Mind
Welcome!
Thu Feb 03, 2022 11:48 am -
Re: It's You, My Love
Oh, understand! Could you share the song?
Thu Feb 03, 2022 11:48 am -
Re: Sarah's The Kind Dog
Thank you so much! Note that my seven-year-old sister is the one writing this, and I just edited this.
Tue Feb 01, 2022 4:16 am -
Re: Resurrection: A Tale of Brave Football
Thanks! Welcome to YWS, YP17!
Sat Jan 08, 2022 1:21 pm -
Re: Resurrection: A Tale of Brave Football
Thanks for the review!
Mon Jan 03, 2022 9:16 am -
Re: Way We Met
Appreciate your support for my review! Would you consider dropping one on my new story? I would be so glad.
Sat Jan 01, 2022 8:11 am -
Re: Haunted Heist
Oh - and next month's (December's) story is in the works. It is also in the humor category, and is a teen-fic inspired by the finale of the Disney Channel ...
Tue Nov 02, 2021 7:21 am -
Re: Haunted Heist
Happy Halloween and Thanks for the review!
Mon Nov 01, 2021 4:36 pm