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Re: The Letter to the Guide - Chapter 2
Hi, Horisun, Thanks for taking a gander at my story! I was indeed struggling to write from two different perspectives or voices. I've (hopefully) fixed that in the subsequent chapter! ...
Jul 7, 2022 -
Re: Letter to the Guide - Chapter 1
Thank you so much!
May 5, 2022 -
Re: Letter to the Guide - Chapter 1
Thank you very much for the review! I'll certainly put 'show not tell' to the list of stuff I need to work on! Best of luck on the literature exam!
May 3, 2022 -
Re: Letter to the Guide - Chapter 1
Hi Andrew, I loved reading your thoughts on my story. Well, yes, the story is overdramatic (in some places, intentionally so). I do understand the point about her knowing after ...
May 2, 2022 -
Re: The Click of A Button
Okay, thanks for letting me know. It was kind of hastily put together, this, yes, wasn't what I was expecting. I might revise this and post the fleshed-out version in ...
Apr 1, 2022 -
Re: Sarah's The Kind Dog
Thanks
Feb 4, 2022 -
Re: Sarah's The Kind Dog
Ok, thanks!
Feb 4, 2022 -
Re: A Piece of My Mind
Welcome!
Feb 3, 2022 -
Re: It's You, My Love
Oh, understand! Could you share the song?
Feb 3, 2022 -
Re: Sarah's The Kind Dog
Thank you so much! Note that my seven-year-old sister is the one writing this, and I just edited this.
Feb 1, 2022 -
Re: Resurrection: A Tale of Brave Football
Thanks! Welcome to YWS, YP17!
Jan 8, 2022 -
Re: Resurrection: A Tale of Brave Football
Thanks for the review!
Jan 3, 2022 -
Re: Way We Met
Appreciate your support for my review! Would you consider dropping one on my new story? I would be so glad.
Jan 1, 2022 -
Re: Haunted Heist
Oh - and next month's (December's) story is in the works. It is also in the humor category, and is a teen-fic inspired by the finale of the Disney Channel ...
Nov 2, 2021 -
Re: Haunted Heist
Happy Halloween and Thanks for the review!
Nov 1, 2021