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Re: Sunny and the Syntax Errors of Doom: Chapter 3.1
Alright, so I was wrong. It wasn't Professor Polly OR Robert being the bad guys (yet) but they were actually the quest-giving mentor types. But that apart, this is actually ...
Jan 1, 2023 -
Re: Sunny and the Syntax Errors of Doom: Chapter 2.2
Ok, hear me out, Adelia is my new favorite character! She is quite precocious and snarky at the same time. It kind of reminds me of Annabeth Chase from Percy ...
Jan 1, 2023 -
Re: Sunny and the Syntax Errors of Doom: Chapter 2.1
Hi Mint, Here with this review as well (before I move on to the next part that is)! I really like how Sunny's character is so thoroughly influenced by the ...
Jan 1, 2023 -
Re: Sunny and the Syntax Errors of Doom: Chapter 1.2
Hi Mint! I'm done with 1.1, and 1.2 definitely exceeds my expectations! First of all, Robert is a great addition as a character. He kind of reminds me of an ...
Jan 1, 2023 -
Re: Sunny and the Syntax Errors of Doom: Chapter 1.1
Heya Mint! Happy New Year! I would like to preface this review by thanking you once again for your wonderful holiday avvies! I'm sorry I couldn't put up the ones ...
Jan 1, 2023 -
Re: Green Door
Hi Liminality, This is one of the most intriguing stories I've taken a look at. Subject #3936 has such a weird world, where seminars about the importance of the seams ...
Jan 1, 2023 -
Re: In the Dark Wood
Hiya Liminality! Here with a quick review for some awesome poetry :) I would like to start by answering the Author's Questions before some comments in general on the poem. ...
Jun 24, 2022 -
Re: Evenings with Family
Hiya Hannah! I'm here for a quick review. I really liked this essay. This is marked as 'Lyrics: Lyrical, Literature' in categories and genre, and I think this can be ...
Jun 24, 2022 -
Re: Anno Domini 2150 - Prologue
Hi ElfBoy, Here's Saad with a quick review. Short rant here, but please stay with me -- I used to be the biggest science fiction fan on the planet. Then, ...
Jun 21, 2022 -
Re: The Game
Hey, thanks for posting. This is Saad from 2022 back here with a review. I really like this piece. As a piece of flash fiction or as a story, I'll ...
Jun 21, 2022 -
Re: Indulgence of the Imagination
"The creation of a single world comes from a huge number of fragments and chaos." These are the words of Hayao Miyazaki, who is the subject of this very essay ...
Jun 19, 2022 -
Re: The Path of Youth
Hey Alice! Hope you're safe and well. I really liked this piece of poetry and I want to tell you a little bit in depth why -- and give you ...
Jun 19, 2022 -
Re: Story of a Guitarist
Hi, hope you're good Morgan. I was very excited to have found essentially a piece of YWS history. As my knowledge tells me, your story was published a few days ...
Jun 11, 2022 -
Re: Angelita-Clowns,Magic,Murder and Lies
Hello! This is my first encounter (and I hope, not the last) with one of your works! I am really excited to review your story, and give you some advice ...
Apr 30, 2022 -
Re: The Birdhouse Out Back
Hey! Really excited to check out your essay. It's been a few days since I did a literary review (I just turned 13, woohoo!), so, my reviewing hand's been quite ...
Apr 30, 2022
