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  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Fantasy Re: Sunny and the Syntax Errors of Doom: Chapter 3.1

    Alright, so I was wrong. It wasn't Professor Polly OR Robert being the bad guys (yet) but they were actually the quest-giving mentor types. But that apart, this is actually ...

    Jan 1, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Fantasy Re: Sunny and the Syntax Errors of Doom: Chapter 2.2

    Ok, hear me out, Adelia is my new favorite character! She is quite precocious and snarky at the same time. It kind of reminds me of Annabeth Chase from Percy ...

    Jan 1, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Fantasy Re: Sunny and the Syntax Errors of Doom: Chapter 2.1

    Hi Mint, Here with this review as well (before I move on to the next part that is)! I really like how Sunny's character is so thoroughly influenced by the ...

    Jan 1, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Fantasy Re: Sunny and the Syntax Errors of Doom: Chapter 1.2

    Hi Mint! I'm done with 1.1, and 1.2 definitely exceeds my expectations! First of all, Robert is a great addition as a character. He kind of reminds me of an ...

    Jan 1, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Fantasy Re: Sunny and the Syntax Errors of Doom: Chapter 1.1

    Heya Mint! Happy New Year! I would like to preface this review by thanking you once again for your wonderful holiday avvies! I'm sorry I couldn't put up the ones ...

    Jan 1, 2023
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Other Re: Green Door

    Hi Liminality, This is one of the most intriguing stories I've taken a look at. Subject #3936 has such a weird world, where seminars about the importance of the seams ...

    Jan 1, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: In the Dark Wood

    Hiya Liminality! Here with a quick review for some awesome poetry :) I would like to start by answering the Author's Questions before some comments in general on the poem. ...

    Jun 24, 2022
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Literature Re: Evenings with Family

    Hiya Hannah! I'm here for a quick review. I really liked this essay. This is marked as 'Lyrics: Lyrical, Literature' in categories and genre, and I think this can be ...

    Jun 24, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Spiritual Re: Anno Domini 2150 - Prologue

    Hi ElfBoy, Here's Saad with a quick review. Short rant here, but please stay with me -- I used to be the biggest science fiction fan on the planet. Then, ...

    Jun 21, 2022
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Game

    Hey, thanks for posting. This is Saad from 2022 back here with a review. I really like this piece. As a piece of flash fiction or as a story, I'll ...

    Jun 21, 2022
  • Article / Essay » Review, Realistic Re: Indulgence of the Imagination

    "The creation of a single world comes from a huge number of fragments and chaos." These are the words of Hayao Miyazaki, who is the subject of this very essay ...

    Jun 19, 2022
  • Poetry » Literature, Realistic Re: The Path of Youth

    Hey Alice! Hope you're safe and well. I really liked this piece of poetry and I want to tell you a little bit in depth why -- and give you ...

    Jun 19, 2022
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Story of a Guitarist

    Hi, hope you're good Morgan. I was very excited to have found essentially a piece of YWS history. As my knowledge tells me, your story was published a few days ...

    Jun 11, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Angelita-Clowns,Magic,Murder and Lies

    Hello! This is my first encounter (and I hope, not the last) with one of your works! I am really excited to review your story, and give you some advice ...

    Apr 30, 2022
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: The Birdhouse Out Back

    Hey! Really excited to check out your essay. It's been a few days since I did a literary review (I just turned 13, woohoo!), so, my reviewing hand's been quite ...

    Apr 30, 2022


Human minds are more full of mysteries than any written book and more changeable than the cloud shapes in the air.
— Louisa May Alcott