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It was a quick little thing I just jotted down so that explains the length, but I like the idea of adding more lines in. Thank you so much!

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Thank you so much for the nice review! I'll be sure to check out your stuff :)

Thank you for the review! I actually didn't mean to do the line thing in between- for some reason if I didn't use them and just put a space then ...

Thank you so much, it makes me so happy when people enjoy my poetry :) I'm looking forward to reading your work as well!

Hi, thank you so much for the review! I agree with you on the word hark... I thought it might be a little weird too, I really just couldn't find ...

It looks great- it really finishes the poem well! I'm just glad you actually liked my advice :)

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Thanks again!

Just keep in mind there is a difference between poetry and every other piece of literary work. But who knows, you've just been SO helpful maybe I'll take your advice ...

Many of these reviews are *your* personal preference, and poetry is all about what each individual writer feels they like best in the poem. The poem was supposed to be ...

Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you felt it captured the feeling of going up through school- my goal was for people to possibly relate to the ...

Thank you for the few nice things you had to say. I used "weird" for that exact reason- it's unspecific, because in middle school sometimes you can't decide whether you ...

Thank you so much for all the nice words! I'm so glad you could relate, and that you got so much from it. I'm also glad you appreciated the imagery- ...