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Re: Life As Poet
Thank for the review!
Mar 28, 2017 -
Re: Life As Poet
That's it!thanks for the review!
Mar 28, 2017 -
Re: Life As Poet
Thank for the review!
Mar 28, 2017 -
Re: Life As Poet
Hey thankS for the review!I got the point.
Mar 28, 2017 -
Re: The Case of Schadel Kueper - Chapter 1 - Part II
Alright!Welcome.
Oct 19, 2016 -
Re: The Case of Schadel Kueper - Chapter 1 - Part II
Hello Mage. Roy, here to review your work. First I'll say this is great work,though I didn't come across the part (I) of this. I think if you can show ...
Oct 19, 2016 -
Re: not afraid to say
welcome
Oct 18, 2016 -
Re: My Nights(Part 2)
Great work Casanova
Oct 14, 2016 -
Re: My Nights(Part 3)
Great Casanova. If its a poem I think creating rhythm will make it interesting and musical. I also think if you can do more on word choice it can be ...
Oct 14, 2016 -
Re: Beautiful Death (Part 1)
welcome
Oct 7, 2016 -
Re: Beautiful Death (Part 1)
great
Oct 6, 2016 -
Re: if only
Really interesting...
Nov 24, 2015 -
Re: Suffer Not
thank for that. Your tips taken.
Nov 24, 2015 -
Re: Guilt
Hello Sigyn.I really like this, its nicely emotional and mind opening. I think line one and five can sound pretty if they can read:- "In lucid state I lay awake" ...
Nov 23, 2015