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rothwise

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Hands Touch

    Oh my gosh, thank you so much! I'm so happy you like my poetry...and yeah I can definitely be incredibly harsh on myself sometimes about my writing - I know ...

    Feb 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: How Society Views Me

    I'm honestly really touched by your review, your feedback is encouraging and nice to hear, so thank you for that!

    Jan 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: How Society Views Me

    Aha always good to hear from another feminist. I'm happy you liked it! And I definitely understand what you mean about a heavier emphasis on how society views me over ...

    Jan 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: How Society Views Me

    Thanks!! I'm happy you liked it! I've always found motivational speaking and feminism to be close to my heart, and I like to get out my feelings through my poems ...

    Jan 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: How Society Views Me

    Thanks Rachel! I'm glad you found it relatable - that's always good to hear! So the reason that I capitalized the descriptors like "Huge," "Made For Birthing," "Broad," etc is ...

    Jan 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Realistic Re: That Other World

    Aw thank you, this is all really nice of you to say! I'm glad you liked reading it so much (: I always really appreciate when you read and review ...

    Jan 9, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: Spelunking

    Hi again Gummy :) Thank you! I'm glad you liked the piece and that you didn't find any faults with grammar (I go over my pieces with a fine-toothed comb ...

    Dec 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Sounds are Colors

    Hi there Gummy! I'm so happy you're able to relate, and I completely understand what you mean about the second stanza and drowning out life with music...I often do the ...

    Dec 30, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Her Laugh

    I'm really glad you liked the piece and found it refreshing (: Always a good thing to hear! As per your question...haha it's not a romantic gesture about another girl, ...

    Dec 30, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Her Laugh

    Thanks, I'm really glad you liked reading the piece and found it effective! I definitely understand what you mean about wishing there was more, but eh, it's a haiku and ...

    Dec 30, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Humor, General Re: 3 Easy Steps to Getting a Boyfriend!

    Oooh I'm so glad this will be helping you! And thanks for the correction of that line - you're right, it does make more sense the way you have it. ...

    Dec 30, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Humor, General Re: 3 Easy Steps to Getting a Boyfriend!

    Oh, I'm always open to reviews on how to improve in any of my pieces! Thank you so much for your suggestions, I'll definitely be correcting parenthesis, and taking into ...

    Dec 30, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Humor, General Re: 3 Easy Steps to Getting a Boyfriend!

    Haha thank you very much! I was actually kind of going for a parody of how young teens write their novels, so thanks for noticing that (: I'm glad you ...

    Dec 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, Realistic Re: That Other World

    Ah, yes, I'm always open to new ideas for ways to improve upon my works! Any particular stanzas that you thought should be blended more together, or any word choices ...

    Dec 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, Realistic Re: That Other World

    Yes, thanks! I really appreciate this review! I'll be honest, I was worried after I wrote it that it was choppy and hard to hearing that it flows smoothly is ...

    Dec 30, 2013


Poems were like people. Some people you got right off the bat. Some people you just don't get - and never would get.
— Benjamin Alire Saenz, Aristotle and Dante Discover the Secrets of the Universe