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Wow! I think you have accurately reflected what every insomniac thinks at night when they're so desperately trying to sleep but fail to do so. Congrats on that! The descriptions ...

This poem is quite different than a lot of ones that you read on here, and I really enjoyed it! It is written in a free and light manner, but ...

I wasn't quite sure about this poem, but after finishing it, I am a big fan of it. The poem flowed smoothly, and you were consistent throughout the entire piece ...

I quite liked this. When I first clicked on the poem, I wasn't quite sure what I was expecting to read based off of the title. When I started the ...

Hey MysteryMe! First off I just want to say that this poem is beautiful. I absolutely loved reading every word of it and the words were so wonderfully strung together ...

Hi fortis! I have to say, I really, really enjoyed reading this...the darker message behind the poem actually struck a cord within me and despite the poem being on the ...

When we first met each other, we were naive and very young. The two of us were different, but we always had fun.

Just a few things :) I loved this, I really felt the emotion that you were portraying in it. Wonderful. It's raining again. I love the opening line! Why do ...

When I first saw the title I thought "Oooh serious title..." and then I clicked on it to see the single sentence. I have to say, it made me smile. ...

Wow...this is a very very pretty piece of poetry. You have a knack for painting a picture. :) The only think I would possibly change and it really doesn't have ...

I just want to write that I completely love this. It feels so...edgy and rugged in poetry ways in sense that it flows like a broken jigsaw puzzle. That is ...

You've probably heard all these critiques before from the comments, but hey, I'll contribute a little... Silly me, I'm back here again Holding on to something that I want far ...

Very sweet poem, and I really enjoyed reading it. I just want to point out little grammatical errors for you is all. I miss you. I miss knowing you were ...

I love it! It was a beautiful poem. Just a couple points to hit on... Beautiful beyond compare, A scarlet rose in bloom, Your eyes are bright, your face as ...

I liked the actual poem, I found it funny actually! It's just the rhyme scheme that threw me off. It doesn't match in syllable numbers at all. I like the ...