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XD technically speaking, no, I didn't write this. I could never write as excellently as the Bible, I agree with you on that! (though I did add a lot of ...

You're welcome, I'm sorry if I seemed harsh in any way :O Okay, then, so the writer in him dies. Whoops, for some reason I thought you were saying, the ...

Yeah, I'm not too sure either, but you're welcome all the same!

oh. well, that's a bummer. you're welcome, then.

I did read it, both actually and whew, that answered some questions, but most of my review I still mean wholeheartedly. :) Thanks for the read!

aww, that's awesome - What a great storyline! Well, do keep it up, then. I hope to read more ;)

XD at least you found it funny!

true, this probably was not the greatest chapter to start on, and thanks for clearing some of that stuff up. (:

Hi scythe, thanks for your comments, don't worry, they were helpful. ;D "His" and "One" should be un-capitalised, a capital letter should only take place at the beginning of sentence ...

nitpicky? oh, no! not at all! I was trying to keep everything smashed together so it wouldn't drag on forever but thanks for pointing that out, and for the review, ...

Hi, lupa! I like what you said about the "perfect" part, I'll probably go ahead and change that, but with the mother... well, I was kind of leaning towards her ...

How embarrassing! Thanks for pointing that out. And you're welcome. ;)

XD your name was too long to type out! by the way, (here's a heads-up) this story has nothing to do with sexual abuse, and I am very sorry if ...

okay. Thanks for clarifying that - yikes, sorry I didn't literally mean 'hate' *slaps forehead in frustration*

aww, thanks tyler! :)