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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter 8.2)

    Yo, how's it going, man? I'm taking great pride in the fact that I'm reviewing this only three days after you posted! That is an amazing record for this here ...

    Jan 10, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter 8.1)

    Yay! We got a whole flashback here! I haven't read much on Star's life as Liadan, so this was nice. But I'm wondering exactly what your point is... We're focusing ...

    Jan 4, 2018
  • Other » General, General Re: carton grandmother

    Hi suki, and welcome to YWS! This is a unique comparison: an empty carton and a dying grandmother. I like how you put those two together - it's different, for ...

    Dec 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Humor, Humor Re: Clipity Clop

    Hello Radrook! What a fascinating poem you have written. xD It was funny, and your rhyme was completely on-point. It didn't feel forced, but fun. Though the last stanza fell ...

    Dec 22, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter 7.3)

    All you have to imagine is that the Ghost Captain is a big scary pirate who does bad piratey things and has a big reputation :) xD This made me ...

    Dec 20, 2017
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: I took a break from work, so here's some reading.

    Oh my goodness gracious. I don't even know what to say. xD Like. This is amusing, but then I don't know what it is! It's not necessarily a story, but ...

    Dec 12, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: J'étais avec toi

    How lovely! I don't know much about French, but a poem written in that language does seem to have a certain romantic quality. I like how it looks. I can't ...

    Dec 8, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter 7.2)

    Hi scribbleinks! Wow. I feel as if I haven't read one of your chapters in sooo long, but reading through this, I actually realized I don't have that much to ...

    Dec 6, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Mercy.

    Hello shusher! Here's a somewhat late Welcome to YWS! I hope you're enjoying your time on here. :) Now, on to the review! I like how this is a prayer, ...

    Nov 29, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Other Re: void 3 - man

    ... yup. It's me again. I'm busy trying to help clear the Green Room and lo and behold, part 3 of your void story appeared. What kind of person would ...

    Nov 26, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, General Re: void 1 - Whiteness

    Hey Thundahguy, and Happy Review Day! Well. This is certainly an interesting experience. I feel about as lost and confused as our speaker! xD Basically, what I gleaned from this ...

    Nov 26, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: J - Part 3 of SMSU Poetry

    How fun! I love the crazy words in here. They make this so jolly.

    Nov 26, 2017
  • Lyrics » Horror, Lyrical Re: Nearly Departed

    Hello there, imyourdensity, and Happy Review Day! I hope I'm not getting in too much over my head in reviewing this because I have no idea who Nicole Dollanganger is, ...

    Nov 26, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Of Illnesses And Antidotes - Chapter Eight

    *cringe* This review is long overdue, and I am so sorry. I don't know why I didn't see this chapter earlier... But wow. Talk about a major plot change. I ...

    Nov 22, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Get Over Him

    Hello TheLeakyPen! I'll just be sliding in for a quick review. :) To begin with, I didn't think your title for this was appropriate. It sounds like a command. Get ...

    Nov 22, 2017


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