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Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter 8.2)
Yo, how's it going, man? I'm taking great pride in the fact that I'm reviewing this only three days after you posted! That is an amazing record for this here ...
Jan 10, 2018 -
Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter 8.1)
Yay! We got a whole flashback here! I haven't read much on Star's life as Liadan, so this was nice. But I'm wondering exactly what your point is... We're focusing ...
Jan 4, 2018 -
Re: carton grandmother
Hi suki, and welcome to YWS! This is a unique comparison: an empty carton and a dying grandmother. I like how you put those two together - it's different, for ...
Dec 29, 2017 -
Re: Clipity Clop
Hello Radrook! What a fascinating poem you have written. xD It was funny, and your rhyme was completely on-point. It didn't feel forced, but fun. Though the last stanza fell ...
Dec 22, 2017 -
Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter 7.3)
All you have to imagine is that the Ghost Captain is a big scary pirate who does bad piratey things and has a big reputation :) xD This made me ...
Dec 20, 2017 -
Re: I took a break from work, so here's some reading.
Oh my goodness gracious. I don't even know what to say. xD Like. This is amusing, but then I don't know what it is! It's not necessarily a story, but ...
Dec 12, 2017 -
Re: J'étais avec toi
How lovely! I don't know much about French, but a poem written in that language does seem to have a certain romantic quality. I like how it looks. I can't ...
Dec 8, 2017 -
Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter 7.2)
Hi scribbleinks! Wow. I feel as if I haven't read one of your chapters in sooo long, but reading through this, I actually realized I don't have that much to ...
Dec 6, 2017 -
Re: Mercy.
Hello shusher! Here's a somewhat late Welcome to YWS! I hope you're enjoying your time on here. :) Now, on to the review! I like how this is a prayer, ...
Nov 29, 2017 -
Re: void 3 - man
... yup. It's me again. I'm busy trying to help clear the Green Room and lo and behold, part 3 of your void story appeared. What kind of person would ...
Nov 26, 2017 -
Re: void 1 - Whiteness
Hey Thundahguy, and Happy Review Day! Well. This is certainly an interesting experience. I feel about as lost and confused as our speaker! xD Basically, what I gleaned from this ...
Nov 26, 2017 -
Re: J - Part 3 of SMSU Poetry
How fun! I love the crazy words in here. They make this so jolly.
Nov 26, 2017 -
Re: Nearly Departed
Hello there, imyourdensity, and Happy Review Day! I hope I'm not getting in too much over my head in reviewing this because I have no idea who Nicole Dollanganger is, ...
Nov 26, 2017 -
Re: Of Illnesses And Antidotes - Chapter Eight
*cringe* This review is long overdue, and I am so sorry. I don't know why I didn't see this chapter earlier... But wow. Talk about a major plot change. I ...
Nov 22, 2017 -
Re: Get Over Him
Hello TheLeakyPen! I'll just be sliding in for a quick review. :) To begin with, I didn't think your title for this was appropriate. It sounds like a command. Get ...
Nov 22, 2017
